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The pictures compare the main essential changes which have taken place in the village of Ryemouth from 1995 to the present.

The pictures compare the main essential changes which have taken place in the village of Ryemouth from 1995 to the present. x2ako
The pictures compare the main essential changes which have taken place in the village of Ryemouth from 1995 to the present. In general, it appears that the village of Ryemouth has become much more modern with for more accommodation and entertaining facilities. One notable transformation is that the farmland has been replaced by the golf ground, and also, the forest park near the farmland has been cut down to make way for the tennis ground. Another striking change is that the hotel in the south- east of the city has been expended with new large car part at the right side. If we look at the sea- coast area, there was a fish market but today, it has been converted into the apartment and also, the fishing port has been disappear. The final transformation is that the complexion of the shop in the south- west of the city has been pull down to make way for the restaurants.
The pictures compare the main essential
changes
which have taken place in the village of
Ryemouth
from 1995 to the present.
In general
, it appears that the village of
Ryemouth
has become much more modern with for more accommodation and entertaining facilities. One notable transformation is that the farmland has
been replaced
by the golf ground, and
also
, the forest park near the farmland has been
cut
down to
make
way for the tennis ground. Another striking
change
is that the hotel in the south- east of the city has
been expended
with new large car part
at the right side
. If we look at the sea- coast area, there was a fish market
but
today
, it has
been converted
into the apartment and
also
, the fishing port has been
disappear
. The final transformation is that the complexion of the shop in the south- west of the city has been pull down to
make
way for the restaurants.
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IELTS essay The pictures compare the main essential changes which have taken place in the village of Ryemouth from 1995 to the present.

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  American English
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158 words
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