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Many countries today are experiencing problem associated with noise pollution.What are the causes of this phenomenon and what effects does it have on the people affected.

Many countries today are experiencing problem associated with noise pollution. What are the causes of this phenomenon and what effects does it have on the people affected. 1akwq
Nowadays, Noise pollution is the less discussed form of pollution. This essay will not only discuss the main causes of this occurrence but also describe how the people affect due to this. The major contributing factor in the insurgency of noise pollution is growing traffic moving through outside and in a country. The vehicles on road and aircrafts can produce high level of sound throughout day and night which can be exacerbated with poor sound of home, school and other places. Furthermore, one of the leading contributor other than Traffic is construction taking place. Many infrastructure projects are being placed at rapid time scale in this globe. The machinery used for this purpose would produce high decibels. Thus, growing traffic and construction work and many other producers of high level sound can be efficient cause of increasing level of noise pollution around this globe. There are many nasty effects of these on human kind. Incresed level of stress is experienced by many people because they could not concentrate on their work as a result they loose efficiency in work. The worst affect especially children whose academic performance can be decrease by this phenomenon. Those people whose job is creative such as designing, writing, their work can be suffer and this affect themselves as well as other colluges. Therefore, noise pollution can affect negatively human life in many aspects. To sum up, Noise pollution is to be considered as global problem which can be worst in future. This essay discussed how factors like Traffic and Constructions are responsible for increased level of pollution and also suggested some negative effects of this development on public.
Nowadays,
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is the
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less discussed
form of
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pollution
. This essay will not
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discuss the main causes of this occurrence
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people
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affect
due to this.

The major contributing factor in the insurgency of
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noise
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pollution
is growing
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traffic
moving through outside and in a country. The vehicles on road and
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aircrafts can
produce high
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level
of sound throughout day and night which can
be exacerbated
with poor sound of home, school and
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other
places.
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than
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Traffic
is construction taking place.
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Many
infrastructure projects are
being placed
at rapid time scale in this globe. The machinery
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used
for this purpose would produce high decibels.
Thus
, growing
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traffic
and construction
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work
and
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many
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other
producers of high
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level
sound can be efficient cause of increasing
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level
of
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noise
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pollution
around this globe.

There are
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nasty effects of these on human kind.
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Incresed
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stress
is experienced
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people
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because
they could not concentrate on their
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work
as a result
they loose efficiency in
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work
. The worst
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affect
especially
children whose academic performance can be decrease by this phenomenon. Those
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people
whose job is creative such as designing, writing, their
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work
can be
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suffer
and this
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affect
themselves
as well
as
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other
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colluges
.
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,
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noise
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pollution
can
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affect
negatively
human life in
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many
aspects.

To sum up,
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is to
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as global problem which can be worst
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in future
. This essay discussed how factors like
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and Constructions are responsible for increased
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level
of
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pollution
and
also
suggested
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negative
effects of this development on public.
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IELTS essay Many countries today are experiencing problem associated with noise pollution. What are the causes of this phenomenon and what effects does it have on the people affected.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
5.5
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