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The pictures below show the recycling process of wasted glass bottles Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.1

The pictures below show the recycling process of wasted glass bottles
Museums of different kinds, exhibiting the objects of historical, cultural and scientific values have always been gaining a great significance in the society. However, most of these museums, in recent years, do not have a free access to the visitors visiting them. Although this modern change might lead to a negative consequence, it definitely offers more benefits to museums and society. In my opinion, it is far better off introducing entry fees than a complementary entrance to such an informative place. Firstly, these institutions do not have any source of revenue other than the funds received from the government's budget. Thus, the greatest advantage of this development is that the admission charges can actually generate and augment their income, which in turn can be used to pay the salary of the employees working there and also be of great value in renovation and conservation of its infrastructure. A good illustration of this is, Madam Tussade Museum in London, despite the ticket prices being exorbitantly high, it has been drawing the tourist towards itself because of its quality and innovation. Furthermore, the visit of beggars and lovers, who come here for personal objectives will be hindered, ideally providing a hassle-free entry to others who actually want to gain knowledge. However, there are few challenges which an exhibition centre and the public might have to face. Firstly, as a part of active citizenship, everyone should get an access to the place which is culturally and historically vital, hence, the introduction of admission fees can be responsible for the decrease in the number of visitors. To illustrate, this reason should not stand in the way of some impoverished people who have always been interested in gathering the knowledge and worthwhile information. If there are less visitors or no visitors, then sometime later, the museums will have to even shut down. Therefore, there is some negative impact as well on this progress. Taking everything into consideration, in spite of the reduction in the number of travellers, there are many other factors like increase in the revenue and a well designed and properly maintained building structure that makes this more advantageous.
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Museums
of
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different
kinds, exhibiting the objects of historical, cultural and scientific values have always been gaining a great significance in the society.
However
, most of these
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museums
, in recent years, do not have
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a free access
to the
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visitors
visiting them. Although this modern
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change
might lead to a
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negative
consequence, it definitely offers more benefits to
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museums
and society. In my opinion, it is far better off introducing entry fees than a complementary entrance to such an informative place.

Firstly
, these institutions do not have any source of revenue other than the funds received from the
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government
's budget.
Thus
, the greatest advantage of this development is that the admission charges can actually generate and augment their income, which in turn can be
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used
to pay the salary of the employees working there and
also
be of great value in renovation and conservation of its infrastructure. A
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good
illustration of this is, Madam
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Tussade
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Museum
in London, despite the ticket prices being
exorbitantly
high, it has been drawing the tourist towards itself
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because
of its quality and innovation.
Furthermore
, the visit of beggars and lovers, who
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come
here for personal objectives will
be hindered
,
ideally
providing a hassle-free entry to others who actually want to gain knowledge.

However
, there are few challenges which an exhibition
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centre
and the public might
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have to
face.
Firstly
, as a part of active citizenship, everyone should
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get
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an access
to the place which is
culturally
and
historically
vital,
hence
, the introduction of admission fees can be responsible for the decrease in the number of
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visitors
. To illustrate, this reason should not stand in the way of
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some
impoverished
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people
who have always
been interested
in gathering the knowledge and worthwhile information. If there are
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less
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visitors
or no
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visitors
, then sometime later, the
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museums
will
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have to
even shut down.
Therefore
, there is
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some
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negative
impact
as well
on this progress.

Taking everything into consideration,
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in spite of
the reduction in the number of
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travellers
, there are
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many
other factors like increase in the revenue and a
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well designed
and
properly
maintained building structure that
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makes
this more advantageous.
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IELTS essay The pictures below show the recycling process of wasted glass bottles

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
356 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
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    Present relevant ideas
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