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The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea.

The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea. kAXe
The given pictures provide information on the way of processing cups of tea and producing it. Overall, the process of producing tea consists of just over 5 steps, meanwhile making cup of tea claim more steps and ingredients. Regarding to the stages of producing tea, there are just over 5 steps including packing into boxes. First and foremost, vast majority of tea is growed in two countries (India and China). Initially, tea seeds are sowed, then due to procces of sunshine, plants grow strong, then their leaves ready for picking and gathering in the basket for further drieng which will be done again with help of sunshine. Afterwards, they should be packed into certain boxes and loaded onto a service vehicle before being ready to use by customers. Turning to the process of making cup of tea, first of all kettle is have to be filled with water, before being boiled and poured to the cup. In between you should unpack and prepared the bag of tea for further deeping process. After deeping bag to the cup with hot water, advised, leave the tea for couple of minutes, then, finally according to your taste, you can add ingredients, such as milk or sugar.
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pictures provide information on the way of processing
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cups
of
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tea
and producing it.
Overall
, the process of producing
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tea
consists of
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over 5 steps, meanwhile making
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cup
of
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tea
claim more steps and ingredients.
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Regarding to
the stages of producing
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tea
, there are
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just
over 5 steps including packing into boxes.
First
and foremost,
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vast majority of
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tea
is
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growed
in two countries (India and China).
Initially
,
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tea
seeds
are sowed
, then due to
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procces
of sunshine, plants grow strong, then their
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leaves
ready for picking and gathering in the basket for
further
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drieng
which will
be done
again with
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help
of sunshine. Afterwards, they should
be packed
into certain boxes and loaded onto a service vehicle
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before
being ready to
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use
by customers. Turning to the process of making
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cup
of
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tea
,
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first of all
kettle is
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have
to
be filled
with water,
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before
being boiled
and poured to the
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cup
. In between you should unpack and prepared the bag of
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tea
for
further
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deeping
process. After
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deeping
bag to the
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cup
with hot water, advised,
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leave
the
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tea
for couple of minutes, then,
finally
according to your taste, you can
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add
ingredients, such as milk or sugar.
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IELTS essay The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
203 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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