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Newspapers are less important nowadays because we have up-to-date access to the news on the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Newspapers are less important nowadays because we have up-to-date access to the news on the internet. Ngd0
In the modern world, receiving news on the internet has leaped throughout the years and the role of the newspapers is now less essential to people. I agree with this claim in the likelihood of the internet overshadowing the traditional way of obtaining news. In this essay, I will outline the reason why this trend happened. First and foremost, it is the fall in conventional newspaper popularity. The essence of traditional newspapers is characterized by detailed and time-consuming editing, printing, and delivery process. This turned out to be a deficiency that leads newspapers to struggle to satisfy contemporary newsreaders' instant quest for news. Moreover, since the newspapers have limitations in their publishing range, the coverage and exposure levels are becoming dramatically smaller and less colorful than those of online reporting. Apparently, it is the online one, not the conventional one, which enables readers around the world to access both local and global news easily which are reported by several globally renowned newspapers, such as BBC, CNN, Zing. Besides, the preferences of online news altogether outperform those of printed newspapers. The omnipresence of the Internet and its convenience has made a real discrepancy in the prevalence of online methods and changed people’s thought that buying a printed newspaper to read would become outdated and backward. It can be understand that which one is fast-moving and can provide the up-to-the-minute news will be more preferential. For instance, thanks to the Internet, worldwide readers can receive the latest news in just a few seconds in comparison to the traditional way, which requires a day later to publish the news. To conclude, I firmly believe that the role of newspapers has become more insignificant due to the influence of online methods.
In the modern world, receiving
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news
on the internet has leaped throughout the years and the role of the
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newspapers
is
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now
less essential to
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people
. I
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agree
with this claim in the likelihood of the internet overshadowing the traditional way of obtaining
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news
. In this essay, I will outline the reason why this trend happened.

First
and foremost, it is the fall in conventional
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newspaper
popularity. The essence of traditional
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newspapers
is characterized
by detailed and time-consuming editing, printing, and delivery process. This turned out to be a deficiency that leads
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
to struggle to satisfy contemporary newsreaders' instant quest for
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news
.
Moreover
, since the
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newspapers
have limitations in their publishing range, the coverage and exposure levels are becoming
dramatically
smaller and less colorful than those of
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online
reporting.
Apparently
, it is the
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online
one, not the conventional one, which enables readers around the world to access both local and global
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news
easily
which
are reported
by several globally renowned
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newspapers
, such as BBC, CNN, Zing.

Besides
, the preferences of
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online
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news
altogether outperform those of printed
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newspapers
. The omnipresence of the Internet and its convenience has made a real discrepancy in the prevalence of
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online
methods and
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changed
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people
’s
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thought
that buying a printed
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newspaper
to read would become outdated and backward. It can be
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understand
that which one is
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fast
-moving and can provide the up-to-the-minute
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news
will be more preferential.
For instance
, thanks to the Internet, worldwide readers can receive the latest
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news
in
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just
a few seconds
in comparison
to the traditional way, which requires a day later to publish the news.

To conclude
, I
firmly
believe that the role of
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newspapers
has become more insignificant due to the influence of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
methods.
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IELTS essay Newspapers are less important nowadays because we have up-to-date access to the news on the internet.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
287 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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