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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion BEP5
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nowadays
according to one school of
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thought
every
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individuals
or to press the anywhere circumstances where a certain Falls open that they should have tried to enhance it
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please
s
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
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i
will
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kirtik
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bo
the aspects
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before
forming my
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own
opinion
A determiner is probably missing here: "the latest".
latest
comments by doing that the one side timer
really
hoping to accepting of any trouble
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situation
there would be no burden on human being in foreseeable future international students for an instance will not be competent to find the
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job
in
Did you mean "nearby"?
near by
place is this they
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have to
wait three to four months in order to
Did you mean "look"?
looking
for
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job
after then they will not face any difficulty reading
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Mohit
to eat on account of facing
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bad
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situation
it would be fruitful and
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job
field there any pressure can gain the experience starting from basic level where there are
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a lot of
trouble there
on the other hand
there are
also
certain benefits to enhance the
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bad
effects of the prime
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positive
point is about the success which can lead to ameliorate the decision power MS
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Dhoni
for
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class
have not money in child in order to attend the training by reason of their poor financial condition then he
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started
the
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
part time
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job
and
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now
he is an international cricketer as an outcome other difficulties can be
Consider using a past participle here: "handled".
handle
easily
what is more
accepting the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bad
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
situation
would be beneficial to any person who
is concerned
with chronic melodies a person for an Indian station going to doing the exercise and follow of that any detrimental disease can be defeat in my opinion extract accepting of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bad
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
situation
it affects more benefits if Mars is to try to
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improve
the sort of adversity
in conclusion
to accept well as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the that circumstances both and advantage is
however
it has more
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positive
point if civilians focus on enhance it
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IELTS essay Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
312 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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