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The picture illustrates the information of electrical production in a hydroelectric power station in a number of stages. The details of each process will be clarified in the following paragraphs. As we can see, there are several steps, started from the usage of river and then going through the power station to provide power from day-time to night-time. Initially, the water from a river will be contained in a high-level reservoir, which is connected with the dam that is open in the morning but close at night. While the dam is opening, the flow of running water will allow generating electricity. After that, the flow will transfer water into the generator at the power station by running pass reversible turbines, which not only be used to operate the generator in the daytime but also work as a water pumper to send water to a high-level reservoir at night as well. At the power station, the generator is linked with power lines, used for connecting with the national grid. Behind the station, there is a low-level reservoir, worked to collect water, that was running from the upper river.
The picture illustrates the information of electrical production in a hydroelectric
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in a number of stages. The
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details
of each process will
be clarified
in the following paragraphs.

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see
, there are several steps,
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started
from the usage of river and then going through the
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power
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station
to provide
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power
from day-time to night-time.

Initially
, the
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water
from a river will
be contained
in a high-level reservoir, which
is connected
with the dam
that is
open in the morning
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but
close at night. While the dam is opening, the flow of running
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water
will
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allow
generating electricity. After that, the flow will transfer
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water
into the generator at the
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power
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station
by running pass reversible turbines, which not
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only
be
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used
to operate the generator in the daytime
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but
also
work as a
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water
pumper to
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send
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water
to a high-level reservoir at night
as well
. At the
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power
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station
, the generator
is linked
with
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lines,
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used
for connecting with the national grid. Behind the
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station
, there is a low-level reservoir, worked to collect
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water
, that was running from the upper river.
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IELTS essay The picture illustrates the information of electrica

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
187 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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