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Some people think that social media impacts negatively on the young generation. Do you agree or disagree?

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As the constant development of technology, social media nowadays is playing a tremendous role in human’s steady life which damages significantly to the thinking of young people when others think it is just a normal part of life. Still, the negative impact of the internet, especially social media is undeniable. Sửa: As the constant development of technology, social media nowadays is playing a tremendous role in human’s life. While others think that the phenomenon that comes from social media does not harm these people, I agree with the opinion that social media brings negatives …. . On the one hand, social media benefits people with the almost unlimited resources which have been collected all around the globe. That brings advantages to people in researching, entertaining, studying and so on. Besides that, with the elaboration of law and order, the Internet is more controllable because developers provide tools and softwares for users which helps young people access the source of information more properly and manage the information that comes to them more properly. Although the negative impact of the internet, especially social media is undeniable. On the other hand, Although the negative impact of the internet, especially social media is undeniable, social media can be a terminator to teenagers if being used for wrong purposes. Teenagers spend tons of their time on social media without any notice with low attention in real life, yield laziness - one of the worst characteristics of humanity. In addition, social media provides people the ability to communicate with others without any rules. That It means that teenagers can are able to be under threats of …. receive threats, illegal information unconfirmed information, even terrorism extremism/ultramism without protection. From those small seeds, they grow into a chaos generation- a generation of laziness, anti religious, or even terrorism. For instance, school shooting which took away many teachers and students, is an extreme action and becomes prevailing lately and sadly, many culprits was teenagers, After investigations, people found out that many culprit had access to terrorism’s information throgh social media. Unfortunately, no one found out this secret before it was too late. In conclusion, social media can have a huge negative impact on young people if not being used for the right purposes and controlled properly. Although, every coin has its two sides, that is why teenagers should raise their awareness about using social media with concentracion and stay away from dangerous sources of information.
As the constant development of technology,
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social
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nowadays is playing a tremendous role in human’s steady
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life
which damages
significantly
to the thinking of young
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people
when others
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think
it is
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just
a normal part of
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life
.
Still
, the
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negative
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impact
of the internet,
especially
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social
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media
is undeniable.

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Sửa
: As the constant development of technology,
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social
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media
nowadays is playing a tremendous role in human’s
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life
. While others
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think
that the phenomenon that
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comes
from
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social
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media
does not harm these
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people
, I
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agree
with the opinion that
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social
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media
brings negatives ….
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On the one hand,
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social
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media
benefits
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people
with the almost unlimited resources which have
been collected
all around the globe. That brings advantages to
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people
in researching, entertaining, studying and
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so
on.
Besides
that, with the elaboration of law and order, the Internet is more controllable
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because
developers provide tools and
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softwares
for users which
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helps
young
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people
access the source of
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information
more
properly
and manage the
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information
that
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comes
to them more
properly
. Although the
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negative
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impact
of the internet,
especially
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social
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media
is undeniable.

On the
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other
hand, Although the
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negative
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impact
of the internet,
especially
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social
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media
is undeniable,
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social
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media
can be a terminator to
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teenagers
if being
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used
for
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wrong
purposes.
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Teenagers
spend tons of their time on
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social
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media
without any notice with low attention in real
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life
, yield laziness
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one of the worst characteristics of humanity.
In addition
,
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social
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media
provides
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people
the ability to communicate with others without any
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rules
. That It means that
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teenagers
can are able to be under threats of ….
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receive
threats, illegal
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information
unconfirmed
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information
, even terrorism extremism/
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ultramism
without protection. From those
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small
seeds, they grow into a chaos generation- a generation of laziness,
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anti religious
, or even terrorism.
For instance
, school shooting which took away
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many
teachers and students, is an extreme action and becomes prevailing lately and
sadly
,
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many
culprits was
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teenagers
, After investigations,
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people
found out that
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many culprit
had access to terrorism’s
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information
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throgh
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social
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media
. Unfortunately, no one found out this secret
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before
it was too late.

In conclusion
,
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social
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media
can have a huge
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negative
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impact
on young
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people
if not being
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used
for the right purposes and controlled
properly
. Although, every coin has its two sides,
that is
why
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teenagers
should raise their awareness about using
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social
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media
with
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concentracion
and stay away from
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dangerous
sources of
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information
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that social media impacts negatively on the young generation.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
407 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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