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The maps display information about the layout of University Sports Centre in today’s and after the reconstruction in future plan.

The maps display information about the layout of University Sports Centre in today’s and after the reconstruction in future plan. 2axeA
The maps display information about the layout of University Sports Centre in today’s and after the reconstruction in future plan. Generally, the land size of University of Sports Centre is same from now and the future. However, there are an additional facilities make this university more convenient. Following this, today’s layout shows a location of main building in the centre of university in between of outdoor courts. The entrance door and reception located in the south side of main building. Behind the reception area there is a 25 meters swimming pools with changing room in the left side of pool, seating are in the right side of the pool, and gym at the north of the pool. On the contrary, in the future plan, the university will alter significantly since then. Where left and right side of an outdoor courts are rejoining with a main building into an east and west wings side. The position of reception and entrance door similar with present layout. However, there are some additional facilities such as a sports shop in the left side of entrance door and cafe at the right side. The location of 25 meters swimming pool similar with presents layout. But there are significant change in gym area, it is larger than before. In the east wings from the swimming pool there are some additional facilities such as sports hall, dance studio at the north east side, and changing room at south east side. In the west wings there is a new facility such as leisure pool and changing room.
The maps display information about the
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layout
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University
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Sports
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Centre
in
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today
’s and after the reconstruction in future plan.

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, the land size of
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University
of
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Sports
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Centre
is same from
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now
and the future.
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, there are an additional
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facilities
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make
this
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university
more convenient.

Following this,
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today
’s
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layout
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shows
a location of main building in the
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centre
of
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university
in between of outdoor courts. The entrance door and reception located in the south side of main building. Behind the reception area there is a 25 meters swimming
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pools
with changing room in the
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left
side of
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pool
, seating are
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in the right side
of the
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pool
, and gym at the north of the pool.

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, in the future plan, the
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university
will alter
significantly
since then. Where
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left
and right side of an outdoor
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courts
are rejoining with a main building into an east and west wings side. The position of reception and entrance door similar with present
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layout
.
However
, there are
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some
additional facilities such as a
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sports
shop in the
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left
side of entrance door and
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cafe
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at the right side
. The location of 25 meters swimming
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pool
similar with presents
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layout
.
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But
there are significant
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change
in gym area, it is larger than
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before
. In the east wings from the swimming
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pool
there are
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some
additional facilities such as
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sports
hall, dance studio at the
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north east
side, and changing room at
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south east
side. In the west wings there is a new facility such as leisure
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pool
and changing room.
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IELTS essay The maps display information about the layout of University Sports Centre in today’s and after the reconstruction in future plan.

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