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The picture illustrates how the farmers produce sugar from sugar cane.

The picture illustrates how the farmers produce sugar from sugar cane. Jwr7k

The picture illustrates how the farmers produce sugar from sugar cane. It is increasingly clear that there are seven main steps, beginning with planting canes and ending with sugar crystals being cooked. Look at the picture in detail, at the first step, peasants will cultivate their land for planting sugar canes. After waiting for 12-18 months, they harvest materials by two different ways. One of two methods is croping by specialized reaper which is more modern than reaping by farmers. These sugar canes are crushed into juice which is eliminated unwanted substance in limestone filter supsequently. After being crushes into purifying liquid, juice is sent to in an evaporater which under the heat, they are thickened into syrups. Next, people collect sugar crystals from syrup by centrifuge. At the final stage, after separating, crystals are dried and cooked to accomplish the last product.

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cane
. It is increasingly
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canes
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sugar
 crystals being cooked
.

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sugar
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canes
. After waiting for 12-18 months, they harvest materials by two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
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sugar
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canes
are crushed
 into juice which is eliminated
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. After being crushes into purifying liquid, juice is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
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 which under the heat, they are thickened
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people
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sugar
 crystals from syrup by centrifuge. At the final stage, after separating, crystals are dried
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