Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The picture illustrates how the electricity is generated from geothermal energy.

The picture illustrates how the electricity is generated from geothermal energy. 7WA5y

The picture illustrates how the electricity is generated from geothermal energy. Firstly, the cold water is pumped below the land for 4. 5 km long. Then, the water enters the injection well where it meets the geothermal areas, which is the hot rock. The rocks transfer the heat to the water, that called convection process. The temperature is automatically rise as it going to the production well. The hot water is pumped up to the condenser on the surface. The condensation takes place and transform liquid into the warm steam. After that, the steam moves the turbine clockwise, that attached to the generator. Next, the power is produced by the generator that powered by the turbine. Lastly, the electricity is stored in the storage in the plant before distributed to the respective areas. The next thing we know is, we can use it for turning on our lamp, and other electronic appliances in our home.

The picture illustrates how the electricity is generated
 from geothermal energy. Firstly
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is pumped
 below the land for 4. 5 km long. Then, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 enters the injection well where it meets the geothermal areas, which is the hot rock. The rocks transfer the heat to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
, that called convection process. The temperature is automatically
Consider using a past participle here: "risen".risen
rise
 as it going to the production well.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 hot You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is pumped
 up to the condenser on the surface. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 condensation takes place and transform liquid into the warm steam. After that, the steam This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocates
moves
 the turbine clockwise, that attached to the generator. Next
, the power is produced
 by the generator that powered by the turbine. Lastly
, the electricity is stored
 in the storage in the plant This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 distributed to the respective areas. The next
 thing we know is, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it for turning on our lamp, and other electronic appliances in our home. 