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The picture illustrates how plastic bottles are recycled in industry to minimize the waste.

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The picture illustrates how plastic bottles are recycled in industry to minimize the waste. In general, there are totally 9 main stages in the circular process of recycling bottles, starting with collecting plastic bottles and finishing with producing the items with further usages. To begin with, people find and collect the plastic bottles in the designated recycling bins around the streets and in front of houses. Following that is delivering them to the recycling center by a specialized garbage truck. Once bottles have been separated and sorted recyclable ones by hand, they are compressed tightly into form blocks. Subsequently, the blocks are crushed into small pieces and washed. The process continues with transformation into a reusable material. The pieces of plastic are poured into a grinder which turns them into plastic pellets then they are heated in order to create a form of raw material which can be. Finally, this material is used in the manufacture of products ranging from clothes and bottles to containers and pencils. These items are themselves recyclable and the process begins again.
The picture illustrates how
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plastic
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bottles
are recycled
in industry to minimize the waste.

In general
, there are
totally
9 main stages in the circular process of recycling
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bottles
, starting with collecting
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plastic
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bottles
and finishing with producing the items with
further
usages.

To
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begin
with,
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people
find and collect the
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plastic
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bottles
in the designated recycling bins around the streets and in front of
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houses
. Following
that is
delivering them to the recycling center by a specialized garbage truck. Once
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bottles
have
been separated
and sorted recyclable ones by hand, they
are compressed
tightly
into form blocks.
Subsequently
, the blocks
are crushed
into
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small
pieces and washed.

The process continues with transformation into a reusable material. The pieces of
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plastic
are poured
into a grinder which turns them into
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plastic
pellets then they
are heated
in order to create a form of raw material which can be.
Finally
, this material is
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used
in the manufacture of products ranging from clothes and
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bottles
to containers and pencils. These items are themselves recyclable and the process
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begins
again.
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IELTS essay The picture illustrates how plastic bottles are recycled in industry to minimize the waste.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
177 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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