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The picture illustrate how bees produce honey and the process of purification donr by human. It is clear that this process requires 2 distinct phases.

The picture illustrate how bees produce honey and the process of purification donr by human. It is clear that this process requires 2 distinct phases. 30W0N
Initially, eggs are laid by queen bee in honeycomb where it takes around 3 days to turn into larva. The larva doesn't fully grown until seven days passes. In approximately one-month period, bees leave the hive in order to collect nectar from flowers. Having gathered nectar, they bring it to the hive to make honey. The second phase is called human intervention. The first step starts with removing the honeycomb from the hive by beekeeper. At the next step, honey liquid is extracted from honeycomb with a help of special machine. In order to gain high quality, the honey undergoes boiling and cleaning stages. Before the final stage, honey liquid is poured into jars and eventually, the ready products are distributed and sold to customers?
Initially
, eggs
are laid
by queen bee in honeycomb where it takes around 3 days to turn into larva. The larva doesn't
fully
grown until seven days passes. In approximately one-month period, bees
leave
the hive in order to collect nectar from flowers. Having gathered nectar, they bring it to the hive to
make
honey. The second phase
is called
human intervention. The
first
step
starts
with removing the honeycomb from the hive by beekeeper. At the
next
step, honey liquid
is extracted
from honeycomb with a
help
of special machine. In order to gain high quality, the honey undergoes boiling and cleaning stages.
Before
the final stage, honey liquid
is poured
into jars and
eventually
, the ready products
are distributed
and sold to customers?
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IELTS essay The picture illustrate how bees produce honey and the process of purification donr by human. It is clear that this process requires 2 distinct phases.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
125 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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