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Most people thinks my health - my wealth

Most people thinks my health - my wealth 96Bwj
In generally, our lifestyles are different but everyone has own ideas. I think, daily routine is the most important thing. That's why I have daily routine. I always observe it. I want to introduce my routine. I usually wake-up early after that I do phhysical exercises in the morning. I love running at the street in the morning. I have a breakfast. Actually, I eat natural prodducts for breakfast. A lot of parentss care their children so They have taught daily routine to their children. Cigerette is spread wide in the wold. It is poison for people's health. Because cigerette affects to humans wrongly. A great deal of man smoke it. They will get enjoyed from it. Smoking of cigerette is harmful. If I smoke cigerette, the colour of my lung will become dark. It is expensive. However, People purchase it. Nowadays, Teenagers smoke it. They do not understand it's loss. If They understand it. I think, They will not smoke. These peple do not live a lot. I tell the truth, I never smoke cigerette, because I should save my health. In fact, 20 % humans of the world residents are fat. The reason is that They eat wrongly. For example, They always eat fast food and fizzy drinks. All of them are not helpful for our body. Maybe, People eat correctly, They do not have illness. There are lots of illness in the world. People eat their meals 4/5 times a day. They will not be fat. I tell about myself. I am slim. The reason behind this I always eat correctly. I eat my food 4 times a day. Diet is very useful. If people observe diet, They will not be ill. Diet meals are prepared by everyone easily. In my opinion, My health is important for me. If i have sickness. I have bad feelings from illness. "My health - my wealth " this sentense is true. For example; 1. If Nozima has a great deal of wealth but she has got serious illness. It is difficult for her. 2. If Anvar has not got money but he has health. It is good for Anvar. The reason is that Anvar may find money.
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different
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but
everyone has
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own
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ideas
. I
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think
, daily
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routine
is the most
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important
thing. That's why I have daily
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routine
. I always observe it. I want to introduce my
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routine
.
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I
A verb is probably missing after 'usually'.
usually wake-up
early after that I do
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phhysical
exercises in the morning.
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I
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love
running at the street in the morning.
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I
When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: "have breakfast".
have a breakfast
. Actually, I
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eat
natural
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prodducts
for breakfast.
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A lot of
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parentss care
their children
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so
They have taught daily
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routine
to their children.
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Cigerette
is spread
wide in the wold. It is poison for
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people
's
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health
.
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Because
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cigerette
affects to humans
wrongly
. A great deal of
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man
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smoke
it. They will
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get
enjoyed from it. Smoking of
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cigerette
is harmful. If I
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smoke
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cigerette
, the
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colour
of my lung will become dark. It is expensive.
However
,
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People
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purchase
it. Nowadays,
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Teenagers
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smoke
it. They do not understand
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it's
loss. If They understand it. I
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think
, They will not
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smoke
. These
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peple
do not
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live
a lot. I
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tell
the truth, I never
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smoke
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cigerette
,
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because
I should save my health.

In fact, 20 % humans of the world residents are
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fat
. The reason is that They
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eat
wrongly
.
For example
, They always
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eat
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fast
food and fizzy drinks. All of them are not helpful for our body. Maybe,
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People
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eat
correctly
, They do not have
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illness
. There are lots of
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illness
in the world.
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People
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eat
their meals 4/5 times a day. They will not be
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fat
. I
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tell
about myself. I am slim. The reason behind this I always
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eat
correctly
. I
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eat
my food 4 times a day. Diet is
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very
useful. If
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people
observe diet, They will not be ill. Diet meals
are prepared
by everyone
easily
. In my opinion, My
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health
is
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important
for me. If
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i
have sickness. I have
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bad
feelings from
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illness
.
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"
My
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health
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-
my wealth
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"
this
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sentense
is true.
For example
; 1. If
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Nozima
has a great deal of wealth
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but
she has
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got
serious
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illness
. It is difficult for her. 2. If
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Anvar
has not
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got
money
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but
he has
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health
. It is
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good
for
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Anvar
. The reason is that
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Anvar
may find money.
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IELTS essay Most people thinks my health - my wealth

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
367 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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