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The picture below shows the stages in the production of olive oil

The picture below shows the stages in the production of olive oil 8LRJP

The illustration graphically presents the production in which the olive oil is produce manufactured. In general, it can be seen that this is a step-by-step process that is comprised of eight main stages, which begins with growing olive trees and ends with sale of the finished product. For a commence, it could be noticed that the procedure starts with the olive trees which are cultivated by farmers prior to being pruned in the spring. At the following step, the ripe olives are harvested from trees mechanically before being transferred to the subsequent stage where they are pressed to get water. It is obvious that after witnessing the pressing step, they are experienced to be refined in advance. Afterward, the refined oil is then poured into the vessels which is followed by being packaged. In the end, according to the data, the following step is distributed to the stores in which they are began trading widely and being consumed by customers.

The illustration graphically
 presents the production in which the olive oil is produce manufactured.

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, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that this is a step-by-step process that Did you mean "comprises" or "consists of" or "is composed of"?comprisesconsists ofis composed of
is comprised of
 eight main stages, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
begins
 with growing olive trees and ends with sale of the finished product.

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a commence
, it could be noticed
 that the procedure This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 with the olive trees which are cultivated
 by farmers prior to being pruned
 in the spring. At the following step, the ripe You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
olives
are harvested
 from trees mechanically
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
being transferred
 to the subsequent stage where they are pressed
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 water.

It is obvious that after witnessing the pressing step, they are experienced
 to be refined
 in advance. Afterward, the refined oil is then poured into the vessels which is followed
 by being packaged
. In the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, according to the data, the following step is distributed
 to the stores in which they are Consider using a past participle here: "begun".begun
began
 trading widely
 and being consumed
 by customers. 