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The performance of staff can have a significant impact on the success of a company. What can companies do to increase staff productivity?

The performance of staff can have a significant impact on the success of a company. What can companies do to increase staff productivity? 08N5
Behind a company’s success there will be always efforts and hard work of their employees. Because of that employer should value the work of a staff members. By giving them reward and making workplace comfortable to work effectively, company repay. First of all, to get efficient and timely work companies should provide appropriate work environment. For that, organization have to fulfill workers basic needs such as office furniture, hygienic washrooms, short intervals, canteen and so on. Thus, employees become more productive and the enjoy the work at the same time. Moreover, friendly atmosphere is also required. Thus, because of this infrastructure and facilities workers happily do their work. Secondly, Promotion and reward have a good impact on performance of a staff. Sometime member of a company feels encouraged and motivated because of pay rise and higher position. In addition, company can also give financial and health aid to the employees. Health insurance for the staff and their family members represent the concern and value of the staff and their dear ones. Workers feel safe and secure to work in that specific company. Therefore, they peacefully do their job and outcome will be fruitful as well as there will be a less chances of occurrence of error. In conclusion, role of every staff member is vital in the success of every companies. So, by making better working environment and giving promotions, rewards and financial help organization prove their concern towards the workers. Because of such motivation and encouragement employee work more effectively and accurately.
Behind a
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company’s
success there will be always efforts and
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hard
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work
of their
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employees
.
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Because
of that employer should value the
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work
of a
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staff
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members
. By giving them reward and making workplace comfortable to
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work
effectively
,
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company
repay.

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, to
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get
efficient and timely
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work
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companies
should provide appropriate
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work
environment. For that, organization
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have to
fulfill
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workers
basic needs such as office furniture, hygienic washrooms, short intervals, canteen and
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so
on.
Thus
,
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employees
become more productive and
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the
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work
at the same time.
Moreover
, friendly atmosphere is
also
required.
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,
because of this
infrastructure and facilities
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workers
happily
do their work.

Secondly
, Promotion and reward have a
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good
impact on performance of a
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staff
. Sometime
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member
of a
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company
feels encouraged and motivated
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because
of pay rise and higher position.
In addition
,
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company
can
also
give financial and health aid to the
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employees
. Health insurance for the
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staff
and their family
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members
represent the concern and value of the
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staff
and their dear ones.
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Workers
feel safe and secure to
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work
in that specific
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company
.
Therefore
, they
peacefully
do their job and outcome will be fruitful
as well
as there will be a
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less
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chances
of occurrence of error.

In conclusion
, role of every
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staff
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member
is vital in the success of every
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companies
.
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So
, by making better working environment and giving promotions, rewards and financial
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help
organization prove their concern towards the
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workers
.
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Because
of such motivation and encouragement
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employee
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work
more
effectively
and
accurately
.
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IELTS essay The performance of staff can have a significant impact on the success of a company. What can companies do to increase staff productivity?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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