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energy generated through various sources in the USA in 1980 and 1990.

energy generated through various sources in the USA in 1980 and 1990. 2OQj
The report reveals the information regarding the Proportion of the total energy generated through various sources in the USA in 1980 and 1990. Overall, the percentage of the total energy generated from natural gas was the highest in 1980, whereas the hydroelectric power was the least in 1990. In the year 1980, close to one-third of the total energy of the USA came from natural gas, was the highest, followed by the hydroelectric power which was accounted for 15% less. Moreover, the proportion of the total energy generated from coal was 18%. However, the percentages of the energy came from oil and nuclear power were more or less the same. As far as natural gas is concerned, the highest proportion of the total energy of the USA came from it in 1990. Meanwhile, the share of the total energy contributed from coal and oil was 28% and 25%, respectively. Furthermore, the total energy generated through nuclear power was just double to that of total energy came from hydroelectric power in 1990.
The report reveals the information regarding the Proportion of the
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through various sources in the USA in 1980 and 1990.

Overall
, the percentage of the
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energy
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generated
from natural gas was the highest in 1980, whereas the hydroelectric
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power
was the least in 1990.

In the year 1980, close to one-third of the
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of the USA
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came
from natural gas, was the highest, followed by the hydroelectric
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power
which
was accounted
for 15% less.
Moreover
, the proportion of the
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generated
from coal was 18%.
However
, the percentages of the
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energy
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came
from oil and nuclear
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power
were more or less the same.

As far as natural gas
is concerned
, the highest proportion of the
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total
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of the USA
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came
from it in 1990. Meanwhile, the share of the
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total
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energy
contributed from coal and oil was 28% and 25%,
respectively
.
Furthermore
, the
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through nuclear
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in 1990.
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IELTS essay energy generated through various sources in the USA in 1980 and 1990.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
171 words
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