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the percentages of domestic access in the United Kingdom, namely CD player, mobile phone, home computer and internet access between 1996 and 2003.

the percentages of domestic access in the United Kingdom, namely CD player, mobile phone, home computer and internet access between 1996 and 2003. kWydW

In 1996/97, about 60% population of Britain used CD player and this figure was up to over 80% in the final year. Similarly, personal computer showed the same trend and doubled from around 25% to over 50% in 2002/03. Besides, cellphone had the most significant increase which began at just under 20% then peaked at 70% despite some fluctuations during the the period. In 1998/99, the appearance of the Internet experienced an exponential growth in the pattern of residental access to this application. To be specific, access to the Internet held a share of 10% at the beginning and after that, skyrocketed to approximately 50% by the end of the period.

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 CD player and this figure was up to over 80% in the final year. Similarly
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 the same trend and doubled from around 25% to over 50% in 2002/03.

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