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The percentage of population has major issue in some areas .is it positive or negative development?

The percentage of population has major issue in some areas. is it positive or negative development? kbGdn
Burgeoning population has became burning question in current scenario. Individuals face some obstacles related over population. . here, i will enunciate negative side pionts in the subsequent paragraphs. Adequate evidences are obtainable to substantiate the concept that what are the drawbacks of this statement. The top-notch point is that if the percent of population incline then individuals will face some difficulties such as sortage of food, unemployment, poverty and some other obstacles related to their life. it will became hilarious task for farmers to fullfill the demand of food because they have limited suitable land for growing food. Sometime crops are not growing well due to the weather conditions. Another point is that if populace increase then people will face problem related unemployment. It is difficult for law enforcement agencies to provide job to jobless people. it is hard to provide job to all individuals. Additionally, it will not only increase the unemployment but also increase the poverty rate. If most of the people jobless then who they can fullfill their needs. they might be used wrong ways to fullfill their basic needs like crime. They might effect on society. Is issue will effect on whole world. In recapitulation, i reiterate my opinion by saying that government has better to enact rigorous laws to allievate this problem as well as law makers ought to organise awerness camps to awer individuals about this problem and how can alleviate this issue.
Burgeoning population has
became
burning question in
current
scenario.
Individuals
face
some
obstacles related over population.
.
here
,
i
will enunciate
negative
side
pionts
in the subsequent paragraphs. Adequate evidences are obtainable to substantiate the concept that what are the drawbacks of this statement. The top-notch point is that if the percent of population incline then
individuals
will face
some
difficulties such as
sortage
of food, unemployment, poverty and
some
other obstacles related to their life.
it
will
became
hilarious task for farmers to
fullfill
the demand of food
because
they have limited suitable land for growing food. Sometime crops are not growing well due to the weather conditions. Another point is that if populace increase then
people
will face problem related unemployment. It is difficult for law enforcement agencies to provide job to jobless
people
.
it
is
hard
to provide job to all
individuals
.
Additionally
, it will not
only
increase the unemployment
but
also
increase the poverty rate. If most of the
people
jobless then who they can
fullfill
their needs.
they
might be
used
wrong
ways to
fullfill
their basic needs like crime. They might
effect
on society. Is issue will
effect
on whole world. In recapitulation,
i
reiterate my opinion by saying that
government
has better to enact rigorous laws to
allievate
this problem
as well
as law makers ought to
organise
awerness
camps to
awer
individuals
about this problem and how can alleviate this issue.
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IELTS essay The percentage of population has major issue in some areas. is it positive or negative development?

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