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Nowadays surveillance has happening at almost every public places ,write advantages and disadvantage of this.

Nowadays surveillance has happening at almost every public places, write advantages and disadvantage of this. 3M68n

In these days, all general places where individuals believes close observation is having pros and cons. The fruitfulness and demerits are elaborated in ensuing paragraphs. There are many disadvantages of observation, the foremost one is security purposes. It means, safety in big cities, reduce robbery. For instance, shopkeeper can go anywhere without concern about theft in shop. Another one is to control traffic, it helps to analyse the running vehicles on roads and easy to block roads, vehicles and directed in free road. To add one more, detection of crime; provide immediate information at police station, hospitals and emergency van. It connected to services such as 108, 100 and 179 which can save life of victim. Despite of pros there are also some darker sides of surveillance in the form of privacy; people feels unsecure because they think, they are followed by cameras, they are not free to do private work. Furthermore, it submits society to state control, and prevent them from progressing as a society. To examplify, some social workers wants to do good works without showing their identity. Lastly, it is waste of money due to its limited merits and quality. Some cameras does not work efficiently, even do no get clear picture of offenders. To cap it all, it can be commented that close observation has merits in the form of security purposes, control traffic and some drawbacks such as privacy, control society and limitation of camera.

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believes
 close observation is having pros and cons. The fruitfulness and demerits are elaborated
 in ensuing paragraphs.

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many
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big
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reduce
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control
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helps
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analyse
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add
 one more, detection of crime; provide immediate information at police station, hospitals and emergency van. It connected to services such as 108, 100 and 179 which can save life of victim.

Did you mean "Despite" (or, alternatively, 'in spite of')?Despite
Despite of
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some
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feels
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because
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think
, they are followed
 by cameras, they are not free to do private work. Furthermore
, it submits society to state You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplinerestrictionmanagementforcegovernmentrestraint
control
, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 them from progressing as a society. To Possible spelling mistake found.exemplifyex amplify
examplify
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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good
 works without showing their identity. Lastly
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does
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, even do no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 picture of offenders.

To cap it all, it can be commented
 that close observation has merits in the form of security purposes, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplinerestrictionmanagementforcegovernmentrestraint
control
 traffic and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 drawbacks such as privacy, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplinerestrictionmanagementforcegovernmentrestraint
control
 society and limitation of camera. 