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The People's Party and Thai people

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Inequality and injustice commonly take place in many countries, especially when it comes to complicated circumstances. Thailand has been experiencing the decadence of politics since the era of Siam. There were various types of factors contributing to instability, as seen from the turning point of the governorship, the Great Depression, etc. Therefore, the People's Party took serious action during the crisis, indeed, called out for their rights. This paper will be discussed with aspects and potential of the People's Party. The reign had changed, but the problems still exist. That is to say. Even though the new king came to the throne, there was no solution for people to get equality. Individuals were forced to encounter the unchanged political construction. The King and his government exploited the advantages; they amassed taxes and seized land properties from their poor citizens. Commoners suffered from being oppressed by their rulers, disappointed with, the government treated them as slaves and as animals. Moreover, the upper-class people took away educational rights from common people. The limited rights to get public benefits after-tax payment, it can be called farming on peoples’ back. When it comes to the worst of the economic downturn, the king and his loyalty seemed like they got no heaviness. Simultaneously, a big group of people could not agree with all kinds of inequality, of course, they stood up for their rights. On June 24th, 1932, the People's Party became dominant. They seized power from the king’s government, they insisted that fairness should be coming from the assembly. They also requested the King to stay under the same law of the constitution, if the king denies the proposal, it should be considered as a betrayal. The People's party promised to launch many projects to rebuild and adjust the construction to become better. Maintaining forms of the country in all dimensions; political, judicial, and economic. Heightening public safety to reduce crime. Reconstruction of the economy by drop the number of unemployment. Providing equal rights for people; no longer oppression. Importantly, opportunities for people to commit liberty and freedom. Lastly, offering rights to study. People should be received an education. As a result, people were the essential factor to keep the country peaceful. They could motivate society into independence and prosperity besides equality.
Inequality and injustice
commonly
take place in
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many
countries,
especially
when it
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comes
to complicated circumstances. Thailand has been experiencing the decadence of politics since the era of Siam. There were various types of factors contributing to instability, as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
from the turning point of the governorship, the Great Depression, etc.
Therefore
, the
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People's
Party took serious action during the crisis,
indeed
, called out for their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rights
. This paper will
be discussed
with aspects and potential of the
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People's
Party.

The reign had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
,
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but
the problems
still
exist.
That is
to say.
Even though
the new
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king
came to the throne, there was no solution for
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people
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
equality. Individuals
were forced
to encounter the unchanged political construction. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
King
and his
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
exploited the advantages; they amassed taxes and seized land properties from their poor citizens. Commoners suffered from
being oppressed
by their rulers, disappointed with, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
treated them as slaves and as animals.
Moreover
, the upper-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
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people
took away educational
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rights
from common
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people
. The limited
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rights
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
public benefits after-tax payment, it can
be called
farming on
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peoples’
back. When it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
to the worst of the economic downturn, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
king
and his loyalty seemed like they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
no heaviness.
Simultaneously
, a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
group of
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people
could not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with all kinds of inequality,
of course
, they stood up for their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rights
. On June 24th, 1932, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People's
Party became dominant. They seized power from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
king’s
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
, they insisted that fairness should be coming from the assembly.

They
also
requested the
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King
to stay under the same law of the constitution, if the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
king
denies the proposal, it should
be considered
as a betrayal.

The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People's
party promised to launch
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
projects to rebuild and adjust the construction to become better. Maintaining forms of the country in all dimensions; political, judicial, and economic. Heightening public safety to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
crime. Reconstruction of the economy by drop the number of unemployment. Providing equal
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rights
for
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people
; no longer oppression.
Importantly
, opportunities for
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people
to commit liberty and freedom.
Lastly
, offering
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rights
to study.
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People
should
be received
an education.
As a result
,
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people
were the essential factor to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
the country peaceful. They could motivate society into independence and prosperity
besides
equality.
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IELTS essay The People's Party and Thai people

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  American English
4 paragraphs
378 words
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