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Teen angst or depressions

Teen angst or depressions Rk6ok
When it comes to moodiness, most teenagers have no attempt to comprehend what occurred in their minds. This is considered an unintentional ignorance, it is commonly admissible that it is influenced by teen angst. Simultaneously, aggressive behaviors seem to be primary symptoms of mental illness which refers to depression. Therefore, parents should be responsible by notice through their children's behaviors to keep them from abnormal mental health. The article reveals 11% of depressive disorders among adolescents. Unfortunately, only 1 in 5 of them could get help directly. By this, there are a diversity of obvious symptoms of depression; anger, lack of energy, hopelessness, Isolation, low self-esteem, adverse thinking, sadness, etc. All of these conditions normalized depression in teens due to the fact they could be diagnosed as a result of teen angst. Furthermore, there are areas of concern for parents to notice their child’s life. To consider the intensity of their feelings and behaviors, the duration of their experiences, and the domains in which they take place are also the diagnosis of the clinicians. As a result, the way to decrease the number of depression in puberty is to serve them to be diagnosed with doctors and early treatment. Unexpectedly, I never thought I would say the article changed the way I think, on the contrary in this case, it is true. The knowledge that I have gained from this site is more than the state of teen angst. I always thought that all aggressive behaviors are common for being teenagers. It could be turned into depression. Plus, I believe that most people are too late to realize themselves and suffer inside. To admit that I never had an idea to learn about my feelings. The moment I read all the symptoms, I started to think about my behaviors. I realized that sometimes I had a number of kinds of them, but fortunately, I did not engage in the disorder. However, I already have a fundamental guideline for me to observe myself in everyday life and caused me to see myself through new aspects.
When it
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comes
to moodiness, most
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teenagers
have no attempt to comprehend what occurred in their minds. This
is considered
an unintentional ignorance, it is
commonly
admissible that it
is influenced
by
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teen
angst.
Simultaneously
, aggressive
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behaviors
seem to be primary symptoms of mental illness which refers to depression.
Therefore
, parents should be responsible by notice through their children's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
behaviors
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
them from abnormal mental health.

The article reveals 11% of depressive disorders among adolescents. Unfortunately,
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only
1 in 5 of them could
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get
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help
directly
. By this, there are a diversity of obvious symptoms of depression; anger, lack of energy, hopelessness, Isolation, low self-esteem, adverse thinking, sadness, etc. All of these conditions normalized depression in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teens
due to the fact they could
be diagnosed
as a result
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teen
angst.
Furthermore
, there are areas of concern for parents to notice their child’s life. To consider the intensity of their feelings and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
behaviors
, the duration of their experiences, and the domains in which they take place are
also
the diagnosis of the clinicians.
As a result
, the way to decrease the number of depression in puberty is to serve them to
be diagnosed
with doctors and early treatment.

Unexpectedly
, I never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
I would say the article
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
the way I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
,
on the contrary
in this case
, it is true. The knowledge that I have gained from this site is more than the state of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teen
angst. I always
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
that all aggressive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
behaviors
are common for being
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
teenagers
. It could
be turned
into depression. Plus, I believe that most
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are too late to realize themselves and suffer inside. To admit that I never had an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
to learn about my feelings. The moment I read all the symptoms, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
about my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
behaviors
. I realized that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
I had a number of kinds of them,
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but
fortunately
, I did not engage in the disorder.
However
, I already have a fundamental guideline for me to observe myself in everyday life and caused me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
myself through new aspects.
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IELTS essay Teen angst or depressions

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
344 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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