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Describe a person you love / admire

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When I was 15 years old, I have a friend. She is Taera and she is come from Germany. Taera is really friendly. She ‘s like an angel. Taera is tall and slim. She have a oval face with a long hair and white skin. Many people say she’s a strong girl, but when I see her eyes I know she is a weak person. Her eyes is brown and small. It is very attactive. Taera has a high nose and I think it’s so cute. She often wears pink lipstick. On the right arm, she has a tottoo is logo of BTS because she’s a big fan of them. Overall, Taera is the most beautiful and so cute I have ever seen.
When I was 15 years
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IELTS essay Describe a person you love / admire

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
123 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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