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The people who live in present era enjoy better living than previous era. ? Whats your opinion and discuss both the views. v.1

The people who live in present era enjoy better living than previous era. ? Whats your opinion and v. 1
IN THIS TODAY'S WORLD, EVERYONE BECOME A AWARE OF WHAT IS HAPPENING IN THE WORLD THROUGH BROADCAST CHANNELS AND PAPERS. IN THAT SECTOR, EDITORS PLAY A CRUCIAL ROLE TO SELECT THE BROADCAST TO BE PRESENTED IN THOSE MEDIUMS. FIRSTLY, THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THE PRIME FACTOR THAT AFFECT THE SELECTIONS AND SECONDLY, STATE THAT WHY WE DO NOT BECOME ADDICTED TO THE BAD REPORT. LASTLY, THE FOLLOWING ESSAY WILL ANSWERE IN THE FAVOUR OF MIX PUBLICATION REPORTING. ON THE ONE HAND, THE MAJOR FACTOR BEHIND THE INFLUENCE IS THE SENSITIVITY OF THE GENERAL PUBLIC ABOUT THE PERTICULAR TOPIC. WHEN THE REPORT IS HIGHLY SENSITIVE, PUBLIC REACT ACCORDINGLY THUS, MEDIA MAKE THE SELECTION AS PER THE PUBLIC CONCERN. FOR EXAMPLE, AS PER THE USA PUBLISHERS, 90% AMOUNT OF REPORT ARE REGARDING THE AMERICANS INTEREST AND CONCERN. HENCE, I BELIEVE, THE SENSITIVITY MIGHT PLAYS A VITAL ROLE WHEN CHOOSING THE REPORTED NEWS. ON THE OTHER HAND, SUCH BAD BROADCAST MAY AFFECT THE PUBLIC HOWEVE, INDIVIDUAL NEVER BECONE THE ADDICTED TO READ THE DETRIMENTAL INFORMATION. OWNING TO THE FACT THAT THE DEVASTATING NEWS MIGHT REFRAIN PEOPLE FROM READING IT AND OFTENLY THEY CHANCE THIER PASSION. NONETHELESS, I THINK, IT IS BETTER TO SHOW THE REALITY OF THE WORLD BU REPORTING BOTH NEGATIVE ANS POSITIVE INFORMATION. BECAUSE, BOTH THE NEWS REPRESENT THE CURRENT CONDITION OG THE HUMANITY APROND US THAT MAKE US MORE AWARE ABOUT IT. IN CONCLUSION. NEWS HAS BECOME INDEED PART OF THE EVERY PERSON'S DAILY LIFE AS IT GUIDE THEM HOW TO DEAL WITH SUCH SITUATIONS. NEVERTHELSS, AT THE END, IT IS RELY ON THE CIVILIANS OWN'S PASSION.
IN THIS
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TODAY
'S WORLD, EVERYONE BECOME
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A AWARE OF
WHAT IS HAPPENING IN THE WORLD THROUGH BROADCAST CHANNELS AND PAPERS. IN THAT SECTOR, EDITORS PLAY A CRUCIAL ROLE TO SELECT THE BROADCAST TO
BE PRESENTED
IN THOSE MEDIUMS.
FIRSTLY
, THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THE PRIME FACTOR THAT AFFECT THE SELECTIONS AND
SECONDLY
, STATE THAT WHY WE DO NOT BECOME ADDICTED TO THE
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BAD
REPORT.
LASTLY
, THE FOLLOWING ESSAY WILL
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ANSWERE
IN THE
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FAVOUR
OF MIX PUBLICATION REPORTING.

ON THE ONE HAND, THE MAJOR FACTOR BEHIND THE INFLUENCE IS THE SENSITIVITY OF THE GENERAL
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PUBLIC
ABOUT THE
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PERTICULAR
TOPIC. WHEN THE REPORT IS
HIGHLY
SENSITIVE,
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PUBLIC
REACT
ACCORDINGLY
THUS
, MEDIA
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MAKE
THE SELECTION AS PER THE
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PUBLIC
CONCERN.
FOR EXAMPLE
, AS PER THE USA PUBLISHERS, 90% AMOUNT OF REPORT ARE REGARDING THE AMERICANS INTEREST AND CONCERN.
HENCE
, I BELIEVE, THE SENSITIVITY MIGHT PLAYS A VITAL ROLE WHEN CHOOSING THE REPORTED NEWS.

ON THE OTHER HAND
, SUCH
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BAD
BROADCAST MAY AFFECT THE
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PUBLIC
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HOWEVE
, INDIVIDUAL NEVER
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BECONE
THE ADDICTED TO READ THE DETRIMENTAL INFORMATION. OWNING TO THE FACT THAT THE DEVASTATING NEWS MIGHT REFRAIN
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PEOPLE
FROM READING IT AND
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OFTENLY
THEY CHANCE
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THIER
PASSION.

NONETHELESS, I
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THINK
, IT IS BETTER TO
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SHOW
THE REALITY OF THE WORLD BU REPORTING BOTH
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NEGATIVE
ANS
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POSITIVE
INFORMATION.
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BECAUSE
, BOTH THE NEWS REPRESENT THE
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CURRENT
CONDITION
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OG
THE HUMANITY
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APROND
US THAT
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MAKE
US MORE AWARE ABOUT IT.

IN CONCLUSION
. NEWS HAS BECOME
INDEED
PART OF THE EVERY PERSON'S DAILY LIFE AS IT GUIDE THEM HOW TO DEAL WITH SUCH SITUATIONS.
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NEVERTHELSS
, AT THE
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END
, IT IS
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RELY
ON THE CIVILIANS
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OWN
'S PASSION.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay The people who live in present era enjoy better living than previous era. ? Whats your opinion and v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
267 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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