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The people are believed to take a yearly driving test to provide safely road life, others think that this situation is not necessary.

The people are believed to take a yearly driving test to provide safely road life, others think that this situation is not necessary. KnVg6
The people are believed to take a yearly driving test to provide safely road life, others think that this situation is not necessary. This essay will discuss both two view and explain my opinion. Today, it is popular belief that taking a yearly driving test is by far the most important to humanity life. Provided that it should be done, people will improve about driving skills by year by. Owing to the fact that driving tests provide people do not remember the road rules. Moreover, they become more carefully by taking driving test because they cannot be overlooked the rules thanks to these tests. To exemplify, people who live in Norway do not make a mistake in road via special cars since they develop with these tests ever year. On the other hand, it is thought by some people that traffic rule seminars should be held by the government instead of taking test drivers. Provided that seminars are organized, people never forget rules throughout their entire life. Due to the fact that drivers will protect not only their life but also all of people’s life. Furhermore, people can enhance about their traffic rules ability. Thus, it can be more effective for all of the world. From my perspective, I believe that taking driving test must be done. Should tests are done, people will be self-control and self-awareness. These phases is crucial for the everybody. In conclusion, majority of people claim that driving test must be compulsory for road safe, other people believe that this project should not done. I strongly claim first view.
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explain
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test
is by far the most
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important
to humanity
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life
. Provided that it should
be done
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people
will
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improve
about
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skills
by year by. Owing to the fact that
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driving
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tests
provide
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people
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road
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rules
.
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carefully
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people
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road
via special cars since they develop with these
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ever
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that traffic
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rule
seminars should
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government
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drivers. Provided that seminars
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people
never forget
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throughout their entire
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life
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life
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people’s
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,
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people
can enhance about their traffic
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rules
ability.
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all of the
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majority of
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claim that
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safe, other
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people
believe that this project should not done. I
strongly
claim
first
view.
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IELTS essay The people are believed to take a yearly driving test to provide safely road life, others think that this situation is not necessary.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
263 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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