Population is increasing day by day, due to which traffic on roads is also increasing. Some people believe that if we can reduce the need for people to travel from home to work, shopping, it will help in reducing the traffic. I disagree with the statement as we cannot have all the people in their houses all the time. The traffic is increased due to the excessive use of private vehicles.
Nowadays, there are more number of cars on the roads as compared to the people it can carry. People want to travel in their private vehicle as it is easy to reach to their destination. People travelling to same office building prefer to come in separate cars. A bus has the capacity of carrying 80 passengers approximately which means a single bus can replace 80 cars on the road. People should use public transport for travelling to offices.
We cannot restrict a child in his home and expect that he will get proper education. A student needs to go to school, college in order to get higher studies. We cannot shop for all the resources online like groceries so we need to go to shopping malls in order to buy them. Also, people travel to have a peace of mind after working for more than 8 hours, 5 days a week.
To sum up, we cannot control the traffic on roads by limiting the need for travel. Instead of that government should encourage people to use public transport whenever possible. It will not only reduce traffic, but will also help in reducing pollution as less number of vehicles on road lesser will be the air pollution.
Population is increasing day by day, due to which
traffic
on
roads
is
also
increasing.
Some
people
believe that if we can
reduce
the
need
for
people
to
travel
from home to work, shopping, it will
help
in reducing the
traffic
. I disagree with the statement as we cannot have all the
people
in their
houses
all the time. The
traffic
is increased
due to the excessive
use
of private vehicles.
Nowadays, there are more number of cars on the
roads
as compared to the
people
it can carry.
People
want to
travel
in their private vehicle as it is easy to reach to their destination.
People
travelling to same office building prefer to
come
in separate cars. A bus has the capacity of carrying 80 passengers approximately which means a single bus can replace 80 cars on the
road
.
People
should
use
public transport for travelling to offices.
We cannot restrict a child in his home and
expect
that he will
get
proper education. A student
needs
to go to school, college in order to
get
higher studies. We cannot shop for all the resources online like groceries
so
we
need
to go to shopping malls in order to
buy
them.
Also
,
people
travel
to have a peace of mind after working for more than 8 hours, 5 days a week.
To sum up, we cannot control the
traffic
on
roads
by limiting the
need
for
travel
.
Instead
of that
government
should encourage
people
to
use
public transport whenever possible. It will not
only
reduce
traffic
,
but
will
also
help
in reducing pollution as less number of vehicles on
road
lesser will be the air pollution.
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