Some people believe that giving much stricter sentences on traffic offences is the only way to improve road safety. In my opinion, I disagree with this statement as I think there are other effective measures that can also tackle this problem.
On the one hand, imposing stricter punishments on traffic law-breakers could be seen as an effective way of road safety. This is because it may deter drivers from violating traffic laws regulations. In fact, some people, especially adults exceed the speed limit, leading to a lot of serious traffic accidents. Therefore, giving many stringent punishments should be enacted. Also, those who drive while intoxicated or using mobile phone deserve to be banned from the road. In recent years, Viet Nam has many heart-breaking traffic accidents due to the lack of awareness of drivers who use too much alcohol. If there are fewer drivers breaking traffic laws, the roads may become safer for all road users.
On the other hand, there are other alternative measures which would also be effective. Authorities could, for example, install more surveillance and speed cameras to make potential law-breakers aware of the need to abide by speed limits. This measure is crucial in many cities as a way to keep people committing illegal actions. Another sustainable measure is upgrading the transportation infrastructures mainly because the low-quality state of roads and streets are the factor culprits of the occurrence of numerous traffic accidents. For instance, in Viet Nam, there are many people falling off when their motorbikes go over a big pot-hole.
In conclusion, in order to enhance road safety, it is not enough to be tough on traffic crimes by punishing harshly those violating the law. Personally, to achieve the best results, the combination of the aforementioned ideas is the most effective strategy.
Some
people
believe that giving much stricter sentences on
traffic
offences
is the
only
way to
improve
road
safety. In my opinion, I disagree with this statement as I
think
there are other
effective
measures
that can
also
tackle this problem.
On the one hand, imposing stricter punishments on
traffic
law-breakers could be
seen
as an
effective
way of
road
safety. This is
because
it may deter drivers from violating
traffic
laws regulations. In fact,
some
people
,
especially
adults exceed the speed limit, leading to
a lot of
serious
traffic
accidents.
Therefore
, giving
many
stringent punishments should
be enacted
.
Also
, those who drive while intoxicated or using mobile phone deserve to
be banned
from the
road
. In recent years,
Viet
Nam has
many
heart-breaking
traffic
accidents due to the lack of awareness of drivers who
use
too much alcohol. If there are fewer drivers breaking
traffic
laws, the
roads
may become safer for all
road
users.
On the other hand
, there are other alternative
measures
which would
also
be
effective
. Authorities could,
for example
, install more surveillance and speed cameras to
make
potential law-breakers aware of the need to abide by speed limits. This
measure
is crucial in
many
cities as a way to
keep
people
committing illegal actions. Another sustainable
measure
is upgrading the transportation infrastructures
mainly
because
the low-quality state of
roads
and streets are the factor culprits of the occurrence of numerous
traffic
accidents.
For instance
, in
Viet
Nam, there are
many
people
falling off when their motorbikes go over a
big
pot-hole.
In conclusion
, in order to enhance
road
safety, it is not
enough
to be tough on
traffic
crimes by punishing
harshly
those violating the law.
Personally
, to achieve the best results, the combination of the aforementioned
ideas
is the most
effective
strategy.
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