As we see nowadays the crime rate has increased comparatively and many people think that building more prisons and putting people inside for a long time will help to reduce the crime rate but actually this is not the solution in my opinion.
The first thing we need to do is to control the crime rate in the society by raising awareness in people and through positive media. The media has a very important role in raising awareness in common population through television and the Internet. The young generation is deeply influenced by the violence based movies and such movies should not me made instead positive messages should be given to the innocent minds so that tomorrow they become the useful citizens.
Another important issue is the increased use of unlicensed weapons openly in society as it is seen commonly now that on small issues people lose their tempers and don't hesitate in using guns. At the same time, security should be increased at society level like in small towns and other neglected places and security automobiles number should also be increased.
The idea of increasing the prison number and holding the criminals long time inside is not a very sensible idea because it is observed that people start making organised gangs inside the jails and sometimes become big criminals than they were ever before. Instead of wasting this money on extending the prison system Government should invest this money on beneficial plans for a nation like constructing modern hospitals, improving the pre-existing health sector and giving better education standards.
To sum up, raising awareness can make a remarkable difference in people's attitude and can decline the crime rates. this is a far better approach than increasing the number of prisons and prolonging the punishment period.
As we
see
nowadays the
crime
rate
has increased
comparatively
and
many
people
think
that building more
prisons
and putting
people
inside for a long time will
help
to
reduce
the
crime
rate
but
actually this is not the solution in my opinion.
The
first
thing we need to do is to control the
crime
rate
in the society by raising awareness in
people
and through
positive
media. The media has a
very
important
role in raising awareness in common population through television and the Internet.
The
young generation is
deeply
influenced by the violence based movies and such movies
should not me
made
instead
positive
messages should be
given
to the innocent minds
so
that tomorrow they become the useful citizens.
Another
important
issue is the increased
use
of unlicensed weapons
openly
in society as it is
seen
commonly
now
that on
small
issues
people
lose their tempers and don't hesitate in using guns. At the same time, security should
be increased
at society level like in
small
towns and other neglected places and security automobiles number should
also
be increased
.
The
idea
of increasing the
prison
number and holding the criminals long time inside is not a
very
sensible
idea
because
it
is observed
that
people
start
making
organised
gangs inside the jails and
sometimes
become
big
criminals than they were ever
before
.
Instead
of wasting this money on extending the
prison
system
Government
should invest this money on beneficial plans for a nation like constructing modern hospitals, improving the pre-existing health sector and giving better education standards.
To sum up, raising awareness can
make
a remarkable difference in
people
's attitude and can decline the
crime
rates
.
this
is a far better approach than increasing the number of
prisons
and prolonging the punishment period.
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