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the oldest house you have been to

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About several months ago, I read a story about the oldest building, which was located on the south of Wales. When my friend retold me how a fabulous house was described it suddenly occured that I had a sense of amateur to hold it in my hands. The image of the oldest building started as black clouds hung overhead and the wind howled through the trees. Flashes of lighting seemed to tear open the sky giving the old residence a megical appearance. It was certainly that was one of the most haunted houses. The most incredible thing about that building was the scene of the historical movies. That's why tourists and appreciators of the film more often came the place to see by their own. And they also took photographs in order to be unforgettable. After all, I have decided to head for the sight of the oldest house. I believe that the one will have a lasting impact on me.
About several months ago, I read a story about the oldest building, which
was located
on the south of Wales.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
my friend retold me how a fabulous
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house
was
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described
it
suddenly
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occured
that I had a sense of amateur to hold it in my hands. The image of the oldest building
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started
as black clouds hung overhead and the wind howled through the trees. Flashes of lighting seemed to tear open the sky giving the
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old
residence a
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megical
appearance. It was
certainly
that was one of the most haunted
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houses
. The most incredible thing about that building was the scene of the historical movies. That's why tourists and appreciators of the film more
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often
came the place to
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see
by their
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own
. And they
also
took photographs in order to be unforgettable.
After all
, I have decided to head for the sight of the oldest
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. I believe that the one will have a lasting impact on me.

IELTS essay the oldest house you have been to

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
161 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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