The elders have numerous classic ideas about individuals' manners and living. While it is thought that those beliefs are not suitable for young people in current areas, I deem that there are still some relevant traditions which value the youngsters.
On the one hand, the traditional ideas are not exactly useful since some of them are outmoded compared to today’s standards. In the past, boys were educated better than girls owing to the fact that males were raised to become breadwinners whilst females were reluctant to be housewives. However, this belief inevitably causes gender segregation, which should be discarded and replaced by equal rights for both genders. Likewise, marriage is a must-do thing people have to do as soon as they reach eighteen regardless of their partners, yet folks nowadays have the right to pick the time when they want to get married as well as lovers. Due to the obsolescence, the younger generation should be precluded from traditional thoughts.
On the other hand, there are many valuable characteristics in the conventional beliefs that everyone could take into consideration. First, the elderly generation gives prominence to honestly and hardworking. In fact, those thoughts are ageless, which benefit youngsters’ life especially when they are working. Furthermore, a sense of community is advised by predecessors to connect cemented bonds in the society. If everyone adopts the mentioned factors, the world will become a liveable place.
In conclusion, I am partly against the idea that traditional beliefs are irrelevant for young people in modern life as there are everlasting merit aspects.
The elders have numerous classic
ideas
about individuals' manners and living. While it is
thought
that those
beliefs
are not suitable for young
people
in
current
areas, I deem that there are
still
some
relevant traditions which value the youngsters.
On the one hand, the traditional
ideas
are not exactly useful since
some
of them
are outmoded
compared to
today
’s standards. In the past, boys
were educated
better than girls owing to the fact that males
were raised
to become breadwinners whilst females were reluctant to be housewives.
However
, this
belief
inevitably
causes gender segregation, which should
be discarded
and replaced by equal rights for both genders.
Likewise
, marriage is a
must
-do thing
people
have to
do as
soon
as they reach eighteen regardless of their partners,
yet
folks nowadays have the right to pick the time when they want to
get
married
as well
as lovers. Due to the obsolescence, the younger generation should
be precluded
from traditional thoughts.
On the other hand
, there are
many
valuable characteristics in the conventional
beliefs
that everyone could take into consideration.
First
, the elderly generation gives prominence to
honestly
and hardworking. In fact, those thoughts are ageless, which benefit youngsters’ life
especially
when they are working.
Furthermore
, a sense of community
is advised
by predecessors to connect cemented bonds in the society. If everyone adopts the mentioned factors, the world will become a liveable place.
In conclusion
, I am partly against the
idea
that traditional
beliefs
are irrelevant for young
people
in modern life as there are everlasting merit aspects.