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The numbers of animals and plants are declining in many countries. Why is it happening in your opinion? What are the solutions?

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, the importance of legislating new
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and educating
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people
might mitigate the problem.
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, according to the last satisfaction of
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them without consequences.

In conclusion
, deforestation and air pollution
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a wide effect to decreasing a
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number
of flora and faun and to solve this problem we can rise our awareness and
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laws
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IELTS essay The numbers of animals and plants are declining in many countries. Why is it happening in your opinion? What are the solutions?

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  American English
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304 words
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