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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problem due to being overweight is increasing

The number of people who are at risk of serious health problem due to being overweight is increasing PMV12

In this contemporary era, people consuming distinct kind of junk food which lead them to obesity. Being an overweight person can cause various kinds of diseases which can be horrible for them, although it can become addiction and never be cured. Eating low carbohydrates food should make a person safe and healthy. The main reason of being an obesity person is a result of eating high amount of sugar, this can increase someone’s belly fat and it can be difficult to decrease it. As people know that junk food has near about 0. 2 saturated fat. However, without oil things can be beneficial to decrease saturated fat

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