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The number of old people is increasing in many countries. Some think this cause problems, weather think old people play an important. Discuss the both you and give your opinion.

The number of old people is increasing in many countries. Some think this cause problems, weather think old people play an important. Discuss the both you and give your opinion. L9XRn
There is an ongoing debate regarding numerous old flogy has been progressively increasing since human arrives, a group of people support that, old age pensioners playing and valuable impression of a character. Therefore, before declaration on my decision both the opinion would be discussed further. Examine the former opinion, the primary argument that supports volte put forward is gradually increasing economic ratio, this is because of government pension rules regarding retired person for example in one survey in 2009 worldwide the more country Texas provide 45% in pension government should focus and do more work regarding this not only changes but also in comfortness of olders. In addition to this, they also believe that hospitality are widely in trend due to more diseases are incoming for senior citizens, the reason is in covid-19 more effects and are illustrate in aged human beings. On the contrary, the later open and has its own claims that earliest people known over the hill, Moreover, take lens knowledge of history's rule as well as regulation and diverse religious. Besides this, they continue featured role in the both communities and families, they are the balls in charge of keeping traditions alive, Haider bypassing on secret cooking recipes for for writing the history books that children will learn in the future. To sum up and offer my preference I would say that oldster play an invaluable role in the community and families. However, government school design new way of bonding retirement is only relying on the active working people can lead to a significant crisis.
There is an ongoing debate regarding numerous
old
flogy
has been
progressively
increasing since human arrives, a group of
people
support that,
old
age pensioners playing and valuable impression of a character.
Therefore
,
before
declaration on my decision both the opinion would
be discussed
further
.

Examine the former opinion, the primary argument that supports
volte
put forward is
gradually
increasing economic ratio, this is
because
of
government
pension
rules
regarding retired person
for example
in one survey in 2009 worldwide the more country Texas provide 45% in pension
government
should focus and do more work regarding this not
only
changes
but
also
in
comfortness
of
olders
.
In addition
to this, they
also
believe that hospitality are
widely
in trend due to more diseases are incoming for senior citizens, the reason is in
covid-19
more effects and are
illustrate
in aged human beings.

On the contrary
, the later open and has its
own
claims that earliest
people
known over the hill,
Moreover
, take lens knowledge of history's
rule
as well
as regulation and diverse religious.
Besides
this, they continue featured role in the both communities and families, they are the balls in charge of keeping traditions alive,
Haider
bypassing on secret cooking recipes
for for
writing the history books that children will learn in the future.

To sum up and offer my preference I would say that oldster play an invaluable role in the community and families.
However
,
government
school design new way of bonding retirement is
only
relying on the active working
people
can lead to a significant crisis.
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IELTS essay The number of old people is increasing in many countries. Some think this cause problems, weather think old people play an important. Discuss the both you and give your opinion.

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