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An promoting number of people are purchase what they need online. As time by goes this is developing. It is known that it is more comfortable and easy.

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An promoting number of people are purchase what they need online. As time by goes this is developing. It is known that it is more comfortable and easy. First of all, I would like to talk about nowadays. Covid-19 is being spread now. Therefore, people prefer buy online then people do not go to store and purchasers do not come face to face. That is why covid-19 of spread is being prevented. Online shopping is fast and people are not fatigued while shopping. Secondly, you earn bonus while online shopping and products are carried until to house carefully. For instance, you order the book from Turkey then book are being come fast, carefully and you do not get tired. In second place, you do not do sport while online shopping. It is harmful for your health because nowadays people pretty move fewer. They only move while go to work, school and store. That is why it has coeducational value. Secondly, buyer do not see product and they cannot be sure. Perhaps time of product passed however they do not know it. For example, someone wants to buy cheap and quality product but product do not come as your wanting then purchaser fail while wanting win. In conclusion, despite that it has advantage and disadvantage, more people are starting to use from online shopping. At the end, it has being a win-win situation for both consumer and sellers
Use "A" instead of 'An' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
An
promoting number of
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people
are
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purchase
what they need
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online
.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
time by goes this is developing. It
is known
that it is more comfortable and easy.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, I would like to talk about nowadays. Covid-19 is
being spread
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now
.
Therefore
,
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people
prefer
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
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online
then
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people
do not go to store and purchasers do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
face to face.
That is
why
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid-19
of spread is being
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prevented
.
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Online
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shopping
is
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fast
and
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people
are not fatigued while
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shopping
.
Secondly
, you earn bonus while
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online
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shopping
and
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products
are carried
until to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
carefully
.
For instance
, you order the book from Turkey then book are being
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come
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fast
,
carefully
and you do not
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get
tired.

In second place, you do not do sport while
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online
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shopping
. It is harmful for your health
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because
nowadays
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people
pretty
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move
fewer. They
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only
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move
while go to work, school and store.
That is
why it has coeducational value.
Secondly
, buyer do not
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see
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product and
they cannot be sure. Perhaps time of
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product
passed
however
they do not know it.
For example
, someone wants to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cheap
and quality
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product
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but
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product
do not
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come
as your wanting then purchaser fail while wanting win.

In conclusion
, despite that it has advantage and disadvantage, more
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people
are starting to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
from
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online
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shopping
. At the
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end
, it has being a win-win situation for both consumer and
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sellers
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IELTS essay An promoting number of people are purchase what they need online. As time by goes this is developing. It is known that it is more comfortable and easy.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
236 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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