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Tell me about your dream.

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When I was still a young, innocent kid, I had always imagined myself dedicating my whole life to teaching students. Observing my teacher, who taught us with enormous passion and enthusiasm, had inspired me to choose teaching as a dream career. However, as time went by, I realized that being a teacher is not suitable for me at all. Every time I imagine myself giving lessons to my pupils or handing out the exams and check their answers around the clock, it makes me feel empty.
When I was
still
a young, innocent kid, I had always imagined myself dedicating my whole life to teaching students. Observing my teacher, who taught us with enormous passion and enthusiasm, had inspired me to choose
teaching
as a dream career.
However
, as time went by, I realized that being a teacher is not suitable for me at all. Every time I imagine myself giving lessons to my pupils or handing out the exams and
check
their answers around the clock, it
makes
me feel empty.
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IELTS essay Tell me about your dream.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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