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The noise levels have impacted the quality of our life

The noise levels have impacted the quality of our life PRY7J
It is an undeniable fact that rising noise in towns has become a matter of great for the environmentalists. I will give causes and solutions in the forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there are myraids od reasons for increasing noise pollution. Firstly, cities provide number of facilities like jobs, entertainment, good education system as well as hospital. Therefore, individuals go to the cities and living there. To illustrate, a survey a conducted that 80% of people daily travel in these cities for the work by using their personal vechile because metropolies provide a good job to the humans. Thus they have earn more income and buy their own vechils. By using number of vehicles and they use a lot of horn so that they can be reached at fast in their destination. Secondly, in towns number of marriage palace and club and other places where people use music speaker at high volume and at late night. So, high volume of loud speaker create more noise in the nature. Moving further, it can be tackled. It can be used at fixed period of time and low volume. Moreover, individuals use the public transport instead of their personal vehicle. Humans use bicycle if they cover short distance. To conclude, government should increase publuc transport so that people can avoid their own vehicle and make a strict claws. Thus, people should follow this rule properly. Individuals should also invalve this act because government should never alone to protect the noise pollution.
It is an undeniable fact that rising
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noise
in towns has become a matter of great for the environmentalists. I will give causes and solutions in the forthcoming paragraphs.

To commence with, there are
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myraids
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od
reasons for increasing
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noise
pollution.
Firstly
, cities provide number of facilities like jobs, entertainment,
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good
education system
as well
as hospital.
Therefore
, individuals go to the cities and living there. To illustrate, a survey a conducted that 80% of
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people
daily travel in these cities for the work by using their personal
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vechile
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because
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metropolies
provide a
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good
job to the humans.
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Thus
they have
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earn
more income and
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buy
their
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own
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vechils
. By using number of
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vehicles and
they
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use
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a lot of
horn
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so
that they can
be reached
at
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fast
in their destination.
Secondly
, in towns number of marriage palace and club and other places where
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people
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use
music speaker at high volume and at late night.
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So
, high volume of loud speaker create more
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noise
in the nature.

Moving
further
, it can
be tackled
. It can be
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used
at
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fixed
period of time and low volume.
Moreover
, individuals
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use
the public transport
instead
of their personal vehicle. Humans
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use
bicycle if they cover short distance.

To conclude
,
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government
should increase
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publuc
transport
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so
that
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people
can avoid their
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own
vehicle and
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make
a strict
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claws
.
Thus
,
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people
should follow this
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rule
properly
. Individuals should
also
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invalve
this act
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because
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government
should never alone to protect the
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noise
pollution.
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IELTS essay The noise levels have impacted the quality of our life

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
248 words
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