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The movie that I have never tired watching over and

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The movie that I have never tired watching over and over again is The pursue of happiness, starring Will Smith and his son. The story is about the life of a homeless salesman, who is trying his level best to sell the respiratory machines in clinics and hospitals, he has a big dream of being a broker on Wall Street. During his journey, he has to find free accommodation daily with his son and also study to be a financial officer. Fortunately, he never gives up and in the end, he passes the test and become one of the talented brokers on Wall Street. This movie inspired me a lot when I had to face hectic circumstances.
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of happiness, starring Will Smith and his son. The story is about the life of a homeless salesman, who is trying his level best to sell the respiratory machines in clinics and hospitals, he has a
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big
dream of being a broker on Wall Street. During his journey, he
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has to
find free accommodation daily with his son and
also
study to be a financial officer.
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, he never gives up and in the
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end
, he passes the
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and become one of the talented brokers on Wall Street. This movie inspired me a lot when I had to face hectic circumstances.

IELTS essay The movie that I have never tired watching over and

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