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Sports and entertainment personalities are highly valued in some societies than other professional workers like doctor, nurses, teachers. give reasons and examples.

Sports and entertainment personalities are highly valued in some societies than other professional workers like doctor, nurses, teachers. give reasons and examples. VY25Q
Sports are now on demand and each and every group of people love to watch and celebrities fill up the fun and their personality where people would love to follow for that reason they are more famous rather than other professionals. Both do hard work to achieve the position but people are habituated to watching live big personalities who inspired them. I am proponent with writer's notion and shade some light on that point which are articulated in ensuing paragraphs. Nowadays, sports field getting more famous due to their talents, highly skilled, wll-trained and they play a big matches and earn lots of hard cash for that reason people are too much interested in them also have a huge fan base. Actors influence to others by their acting such as do comedy scenes, action scenes which are exciting and people appreciate their work rather than a teacher who plays a crucial role in country's future but no one would like to remember them also doctor who conside as a god but they are having least priority compares to the athletes and entertains. Furthermore, people mesmerize the actor eho play a role of any kind of actual hero, but they make movie on biopic whether it can upon a doctor, an army or anyone and appreciate the reel hero not a real hero so this is the major reason why they are more valuable than others. to cite an example, Virat Kohli a famous sport person who have 150+ million followers in Instagram because of the aggression and known as a "Run-Machine". On balance, they are well experienced people and represents the country by paying international matches that is the prime reason also media is a platform who give a lot of importance to them.
Sports are
now
on demand and each and every group of
people
love
to
watch
and celebrities fill up the fun and their personality where
people
would
love
to follow for that
reason
they are more
famous
rather
than other professionals. Both do
hard
work to achieve the position
but
people
are habituated
to watching
live
big
personalities
who
inspired them. I am proponent with writer's notion and shade
some
light on that point which
are articulated
in ensuing paragraphs.

Nowadays, sports field getting more
famous
due to their talents,
highly
skilled,
wll-trained and
they play a
big
matches and earn lots of
hard
cash for that
reason
people
are too much interested in them
also
have a huge fan base. Actors influence to others by their acting such as do comedy scenes, action scenes which are exciting and
people
appreciate their work
rather
than a teacher
who
plays a crucial role in country's future
but
no one would like to remember them
also
doctor
who
conside
as a god
but
they are having
least
priority compares to the athletes and entertains.

Furthermore
,
people
mesmerize the actor
eho
play a role of any kind of actual hero,
but
they
make
movie on biopic whether it can upon a doctor, an army or anyone and appreciate the reel hero not a real hero
so
this is the major
reason
why they are more valuable than others.
to
cite an example,
Virat
Kohli
a
famous
sport person
who
have 150+ million followers in Instagram
because
of the aggression and known as a
"
Run-Machine
"
.

On balance, they are well experienced
people
and represents the country by paying international matches
that is
the prime
reason
also
media is a platform
who
give
a lot of
importance to them.
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IELTS essay Sports and entertainment personalities are highly valued in some societies than other professional workers like doctor, nurses, teachers. give reasons and examples.

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