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The most your memorable holidays

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Honestly, I'm not a big fan of larger group trips because you're not free to do what you want. You have to stick to the itinerary and do what is pre-planned with the tour guide. That is the reason why I always opt for a trip by self-guided tour. Five months ago, I had a short break with my adventurous friends to Vung Tau- the first place on my bucket list. It's a greatly popular holiday destination with hordes of tourists. We stayed in a youth hostel and walked around the beach coast to enjoy the bustling nightlife view of this city. It's the most memorable experience for us. If It's a longer vacation, I'd like to travel to a far-off destination, go sightseeing, and learn about other cultures. On the contrary, my family prefer to take some guided tours with a package holiday. Last summer year, we had the holiday of a lifetime, a two week to Phan Thiet. This was a place of interest that had a lot of holiday resorts. I loved the feeling that walked along the coast taking in the stunning landscapes, picturesque resorts and tried some local cuisine there. At the end of the trip, I also bought some local crafts for my friends. Summer vacation was a crucial holiday for me that I can get away from my hectic work schedule and relieve stress, re-energize myself. I only wish I had more vacation time.
Honestly
, I'm not a
big
fan of larger group trips
because
you're not free to do what you want. You
have to
stick to the itinerary and do what is
pre-planned
with the tour guide.
That is
the reason why I always opt for a trip by self-guided tour. Five months ago, I had a short break with my adventurous friends to
Vung
Tau- the
first
place on my bucket list. It's a
greatly
popular
holiday
destination with hordes of tourists. We stayed in a youth hostel and walked around the beach coast to enjoy the bustling nightlife view of this city. It's the most memorable experience for us. If It's a longer vacation, I'd like to travel to a far-off destination, go sightseeing, and learn about other cultures.
On the contrary
, my family prefer to take
some
guided tours with a package
holiday
. Last summer year, we had the
holiday
of a lifetime, a two week to
Phan
Thiet
. This was a place of interest that had
a lot of
holiday
resorts. I
loved
the feeling that walked along the coast taking in the stunning landscapes, picturesque resorts and tried
some
local cuisine there. At the
end
of the trip, I
also
bought
some
local crafts for my friends. Summer vacation was a crucial
holiday
for me that I can
get
away from my hectic work schedule and relieve
stress
, re-energize myself. I
only
wish I had more vacation time.
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IELTS essay The most your memorable holidays

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