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More and more people buy branded cars , clothes and other things . What are the reason behind it and it is negative or positive development

More and more people buy branded cars, clothes and other things. What are the reason behind it and it is negative or positive development DVWWk
In this cutting edge era, purchasing branded products has been escalated for last five years. I intend to discuss its factors, and i think it is negative development which i will explain in subsequent deliberations. To begin with the factors that the predominant reason is that nowadays, people want to show their status in order to make raputation in the community by buying expensive items which result in keeping make their image towards others. Apart from this, advertising has great influnce on human's life due to the fact that they foster to purchase different arrays of garmants vehicls and other things. To epitome, some advertising are showed by famous celebrities which give the information about specific product so, human beings imitate them in their life buy taking branded material. Moreover, some people have curiosity to collect brand things as well as spending money on high status products which gives them real satisfaction in their life. Nextly, i feel that it has distinguished adverse impact on people life. Sometimes, people cannot afford the branded items so, they have feeling of indeqency which put harm effect on their life. In addition to it, by watching adverts, people buy things which also affect to their family budget owing to this, people waste money on unnecessary items which they have no need without knowing quality and capacity of varoius brands. However, by selling expensive things campanies can take huge profit and improve their economic condition To sum up, it is common nowadays for gatting branded clothes, cars and so on. People just show their high status in front of others while it has detrimental impact on society as well as individuals life
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branded
products has
been escalated
for last five years. I intend to discuss its factors, and
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think
it is
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negative
development which
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will
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explain
in subsequent deliberations. To
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begin
with the factors that the predominant reason is that nowadays,
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people
want to
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show
their status in order to
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make
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raputation
in the community by buying expensive items which result in keeping
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make
their image towards others. Apart from this, advertising has great
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influnce
on human's
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life
due to the fact that they foster to
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purchase
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different
arrays of
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garmants
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vehicls
and other things. To epitome,
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some
advertising are
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showed
by
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famous celebrities
which give the information about specific product
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so
, human beings imitate them in their
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life
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buy
taking
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branded
material.
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,
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some
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people
have curiosity to collect brand things
as well
as spending money on high status products which gives them real satisfaction in their
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life
.
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Nextly
,
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feel that it has distinguished adverse impact on
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people
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life
.
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people
cannot afford the
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branded
items
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so
, they have feeling of
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indeqency
which put harm effect on their
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life
.
In addition
to it, by watching adverts,
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people
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buy
things which
also
affect to their family budget owing to this,
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people
waste money on unnecessary items which they have no need without knowing quality and capacity of
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varoius
brands.
However
, by selling expensive things
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campanies
can take huge profit and
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improve
their economic condition To sum up, it is common nowadays for
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gatting
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branded
clothes, cars and
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so
on.
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People
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just
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show
their high status in front of others while it has detrimental impact on society
as well
as individuals
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life
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IELTS essay More and more people buy branded cars, clothes and other things. What are the reason behind it and it is negative or positive development

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