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Describe the view of your home town

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Intro_people live in various places where many types of facilities are available My hometown is a Amargarh which is situated near Nabha and Malerkotla in Punjab. Here I would like to talk about street market which is famous in my village. It is none other than shastri market. The shastri market is a famous. It is the heart of city. In this market all things are available. Such as clothes, footwear so on. Moreover I usually go with my mother von weekends. Because of at the last day of the week there are sales. In which all costly products are selling on some discount. Furthermore, many vendors come to sale their products like food, clothes so on. In this street market all types of food available. The food of street market is very delicious. Besides, all types of clothes are available in this market apart from that all things are taking by reasonable price.
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in Punjab. Here I would like to talk about street
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market
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shastri
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market
. The
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shastri
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market
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all things are
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vendors
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on. In this street
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market
all types of food
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is
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IELTS essay Describe the view of your home town

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
154 words
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