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Describe a view of street market

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I saw many street market but I like patiala street market. Often, I go in this market with my family. Last night, I went patiala street market with my sister. I did lot enjoy in this market. All types of clothes available in this market. I purchased new apple Watch. This watch looked very pretty. Last year I celebrated my birthday with my friend's in this market. Way of this market is very attractive at night because in night street is very decorate with lightning.
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with my sister. I did lot enjoy in this
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. All types of clothes available in this
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pretty. Last year I celebrated my birthday with my friend's in this
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IELTS essay Describe a view of street market

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
85 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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