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the most substantial target for the governments

the most substantial target for the governments Q5g3b
Governments and People have conflicting opinions on whether the most substantial target for the governments should be economic development or an equivalent combination of other signs of progress. While discussing both of these views, I believe that every further progression rather than economic originates from this area while people may be unaware of it. On the one hand, I can conceive what precisely some people think of by supporting equal development in many fields and areas. There are ample areas in demand of improvement in all societies, some of which may seem more critical in the public's view. For instance, a taxpayer might think that medical or educational facilities are more likely to face immense difficulties if they do not receive sufficient governmental attention. Another reason for this opinion may be the belief that economic growth is just a tool to show off a government and does not have any positive impacts on public demands. However, the economy's progress is more necessary for the governments, and they are mostly manoeuvring this. There may also be many compelling reasons for this belief. Economics is a strict criterion between powerful countries. The more potent a country's economy is, the more powerful it is. Furthermore, every growth in other terms stems from economics, so rarely are a country capable of providing adequate fundings for its services if it has a vulnerable economy. I believe that people with the opposite view must be completely unaware of economics and its chronological impacts on other Social fields. In conclusion, by understanding both views about the focus of the government's operations, I believe economic growth is far more vital than other types of progression and would subsequently bring developments for other fields.
Governments
and
People
have conflicting opinions on whether the most substantial target for the
governments
should be
economic
development or an equivalent combination of
other
signs of progress. While discussing both of these
views
, I believe that every
further
progression
rather
than
economic
originates from this area while
people
may be unaware of it.

On the one hand, I can conceive what
precisely
some
people
think
of by supporting equal development in
many
fields and areas. There are ample areas in demand of improvement in all societies,
some
of which may seem more critical in the public's
view
.
For instance
, a taxpayer might
think
that medical or educational facilities are more likely to face immense difficulties if they do not receive sufficient governmental attention. Another reason for this opinion may be the belief that
economic
growth is
just
a tool to
show
off a
government
and does not have any
positive
impacts on public demands.

However
, the economy's progress is more necessary for the
governments
, and they are
mostly
manoeuvring
this. There may
also
be
many
compelling reasons for this belief.
Economics
is a strict criterion between powerful countries. The more potent a country's economy is, the more powerful it is.
Furthermore
, every growth in
other
terms stems from
economics
,
so
rarely are a country capable of providing adequate
fundings
for its services if it has a vulnerable economy. I believe that
people
with the opposite
view
must
be completely unaware of
economics
and its chronological impacts on
other
Social fields.

In conclusion
, by understanding both
views
about the focus of the
government
's operations, I believe
economic
growth is far more vital than
other
types of progression and would
subsequently
bring developments for
other
fields.
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IELTS essay the most substantial target for the governments

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
285 words
6.0
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