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Currently it is common for many citizens to keep pets at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Currently it is common for many citizens to keep pets at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? 6LnrW
In recent decades, keeping a pet at home is a popular activity with residents. This trend also creates certain benefits but there will also be some drawbacks. On the one hand, there are several reasons why having a pet is beneficial. Firstly, pets can have some emotional benefits. It can help owners reduce stress after a hard day's work and make them feel more comfortable because they bring joy and pleasure to their owners' lives. Secondly, domesticated animals are very useful. For example, if we raise a dog or a cat, it can help us protect homes when we don't stay at home and reduce vermin, stay away from rat issues. On the other hand, there are several disadvantages of having a pet that people should consider. The principal one is raising a pet is costly because of numerous bills for food, regular health check or toys. Moreover, pets need a lot of daily care. For example, a dog needs to go outside every and If If owners neglect it, they can become ill
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emotional benefits. It can
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owners
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reduce
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us protect homes when we don't stay at home and
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reduce
vermin, stay away from rat issues.

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should consider. The principal one is raising a pet is costly
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of numerous bills for food, regular health
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or toys.
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daily care.
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IELTS essay Currently it is common for many citizens to keep pets at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
173 words
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