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The adolescent period, the period from 13 to 19 years old, is a period when children experience many physical and psychological changes, especially psychological ones. Because this is the age when they are growing up, they begin to have an initial awareness of life, so character education for children is extremely important. At this stage, children will be affected by many surrounding factors to create their own characteristics. And the influence of parents and friends contributes mainly to the development of children. The influence of family and friends is different on children's behavior and academic performance.
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IELTS essay compare the influence of family and peer on teenager

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