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The most memorable moment of my life

The most memorable moment of my life NWM6q

There arevmany events or moments which we experiences in our lives. Among those some becomes memorable for us, which could be time spent with friends, family or it could be travel diaries. There's something I would like to talk about. It was one of my tour with friends n the last semester of the college. That was the last time we traveled together. Spending those two days in the site of polo-forest were unforgettable.

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 becomes memorable for us, which could be time spent with friends, family or it could be travel diaries. There's something I would like to talk about. It was one of my tour with friends n the last semester of the college. That was the last time we traveled together. Spending those two days in the site of polo-forest were unforgettable. 

IELTS essay The most memorable moment of my life

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American English

1 paragraphs

74 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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Task Achievement: 5.5

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