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2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of modern technology, students nowadays can study at home more effectively

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From my point of view, I completely agree with the view that with the help of modern technology, students nowadays can study at home more effectively. Firstly, with modern technology, especially the Internet, students can easily access document resources. Because several educational resources from many countries, such as ebooks, audio and video lectures are all on the Internet which students can freely download for learning. Secondly, technology can help students save money and time. because we don’t have to spend much time travelling to school and don't have to buy so many books and school supplies. Finally, the technology provides various types of tools and platforms which help students feel comfortable and more understanding of the lesson. In conclusion, technology is one of the tools which could help students improve their learning at home process.
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students
feel comfortable and more understanding of the lesson.
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IELTS essay 2. With the help of modern technology, students nowadays can study at home more effectively

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