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The most interesting place you have been to.

The most interesting place you have been to. pa93a
I have been to many places in Vietnam, but the most interesting place that I always remember is Ha Noi-capital of Vietnam. I have been there 1 week. We stayed in a hotel near The Temple of Literature. After time we set up the room in the hotel, we started to visit many beautiful place in Ha Noi. To begin with, The Temple of Literature- the first university in Vietnam, I was very excited to visit it and see the Stelae of Doctors with my own eyes. In addition, we went to Nguyen Hue walking street and it lot of street food and sightseeing around. When I been there, I met a lot of foreigners. And the next day, We went around Hoan Kiem Lake and took some photos with The Huc bridge. After 3 days we stay here, I love this place even more because most people in there are very friendly and it have many beautiful places. I will definitely come back here if I have a chance
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IELTS essay The most interesting place you have been to.

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  American English
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