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Nowadays, University degree and its corresponding impact in a person’s life has sparked a heated debate.

Nowadays, University degree and its corresponding impact in a person’s life has sparked a heated debate. 30eDd
Nowadays, University degree and its corresponding impact in a person’s life has sparked a heated debate. Although there are some advantages in having educational qualification, there are as well as some noticeable downsides. I will analyze both opinions throughout this essay. Whereas the university campus because of communication of students from different areas, religions, and various countries, expand a student’s world-wild, and leads them to better communication on life. For example, students can have a better communication with people thanks to their communication at the university, which brings them success in their lives, by making them socialized persons. In the long run, they will find job easily and when they want to go to an interview meeting, they will communicate better than the individuals that do not go to university. So, it is not exactly about the documents and the certificates, it is about the process of the educational qualifications. On the other hand, today it is not important that what certificate do you have. For example, I saw that people with PHD degrees and other postgraduate degrees that work among the persons with bachelor’s degree, so it is not important to the managers or clients that what university qualifications do you have and what you can do and your qualifications are more important than the certificate. In conclusion, you do not a university qualification to get a job, and for being successful it is not necessary to have educational qualification. Even though having a high amount of knowledge about your required job, will helps you to get the job, by ensure clients that you are qualify. In conclude, although, regarded by many that there are some advantages to having educational qualification, I profoundly believe that today it is not as much important to have the educational qualification. There are many things help you succeed, such as your knowledge, your communications, people you know can also introduce you to new people and it leads you to new worlds of business, and as well as makes you become more succeed by experience new communications and work with new clients.
Nowadays,
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and its corresponding impact in a person’s life has sparked a heated debate.

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some
advantages in having
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educational
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qualification
, there are
as well
as
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some
noticeable downsides. I will analyze both opinions throughout this essay.

Whereas the
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campus
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of
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communication
of students from
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different
areas, religions, and various countries, expand a student’s world-wild, and leads them to better
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communication
on life.
For example
, students can have a better
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communication
with
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people
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thanks
to their
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communication
at the
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university
, which brings them success in their
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lives
, by making them socialized persons. In the long run, they will find
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job
easily
and when they want to go to an interview meeting, they will communicate better than the individuals that do not go to
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university
.
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So
, it is not exactly about the documents and the certificates, it is about the process of the
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educational
qualifications.

On the other hand
,
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that what certificate do you have.
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saw
that
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with
The more common abbreviation of the term 'philosophiae doctor' is "PhD".
PHD
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degrees
and other postgraduate
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degrees
that work among the persons with bachelor’s
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degree
,
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it is not
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important
to the managers or clients that what
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qualifications
do you have and what you can do and your
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qualifications
are more
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important
than the certificate.
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, you do not a
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university
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qualification
to
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a
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job
, and for being successful it is not necessary to have
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educational
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qualification
.
Even though
having a high amount of knowledge about your required
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job
, will
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helps
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In conclude, although, regarded by
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that there are
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advantages to having
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educational
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qualification
, I
profoundly
believe that
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today
it is not as much
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to have the
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educational
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qualification
. There are
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many
things
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help
you succeed, such as your knowledge, your communications,
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people
you know can
also
introduce you to
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people
and it leads you to
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new
worlds of business, and
as well
as
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makes
you become more succeed by experience
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new
communications and work with
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new
clients.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, University degree and its corresponding impact in a person’s life has sparked a heated debate.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
348 words
6.0
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