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Give an example of a time you had to work with someone from different backround

Give an example of a time you had to work with someone from different backround eEYlx
The most worth telling one took place several years ago. Back in 2018 i had a chance to live with a person who was a reason to change my life. His name is Islamjan, my brother's friend. The reason why i lived with him in a flat is that i went there to spend my summer holiday taken by my brother we dwelled there for two months. During this period i learnt a great deal of things. In particular, Bobur seemed a brilliant person. What i liked most about him is his inborn talent to language learning. He was so generous and happy person, while he would become serious when it comes to learning a language. He taught me English language. By doing so, something was born in my soul towards learning foreign language. As for his character, he was much reserved and assertive. He has a lot of plans for his future and does his best every single day to get closer to his success. Having seen his chatacter and his dedication, i was motivated automatically. I have to say before meeting him i had no idea about my future career. With one word he showed me the way of bright future with his valuable advices. I hope i will meet such kind of people with unique personality.
The most worth telling one took place several years ago. Back in 2018
i
had a chance to
live
with a person who was a reason to
change
my life. His name is
Islamjan
, my brother's friend. The reason why
i
lived
with him in a flat is that
i
went there to spend my summer holiday taken by my brother we
dwelled
there for two months. During this period
i
learnt
a great deal of things.
In particular
,
Bobur
seemed a brilliant person. What
i
liked most about him is his inborn talent to
language
learning. He was
so
generous and happy person, while he would become serious when it
comes
to learning a
language
. He taught me English
language
. By doing
so
, something
was born
in my soul towards learning foreign
language
. As for his character, he was much reserved and assertive. He has
a lot of
plans for his future and does his best every single day to
get
closer to his success. Having
seen
his
chatacter
and his dedication,
i
was motivated
automatically
. I
have to
say
before
meeting him
i
had no
idea
about my future career. With one word he
showed
me the way of bright future with his valuable advices. I hope
i
will
meet
such kind of
people
with unique personality.
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IELTS essay Give an example of a time you had to work with someone from different backround

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
219 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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